you have just read an article in an international travel magazine which contained some information about your town that is incorrect
write a letter to the editor of the magazine. In your letter
* correct the information in the article
* explain why it is important for the magazine to give correct information
* suggest what the magazine should do about the situation
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am Manas Ranjan Sahu indigenous to Rockdown town which is famous for its idyllic views and a renowned festival named as Chocojane. I am writing this letter to inform you about an article, which is recently published one week ago, has a piece of misleading information about Chocojane.
In the article, it is mentioned that the festival starts from the first week of October; however, in fact, it begins from 3rd week of October every year. In my opinion, it is a tremendous mistake that has made by your publishers.
Although it describes all agenda of the festival, it will disguise the tourist, who all depend on your magazine to plan their travel journey accordingly and chances of losing trust factor
I will suggest you that, kindly republish the same article with appropriate information and an apologies note to my native people, which will not only increase tourist adherence toward your article but also there will be warm regards from Rockdown people.
Hope you will act on this deceptive article and soon come up with concrete details about the Chocojane festival.
Yours faithfully,
Manas Ranjan Sahu
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
accordingly, also, but, first, however, so, in fact, in my opinion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 24.0 32.9175257732 73% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 26.3917525773 95% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 945.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 187.0 206.0 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05347593583 4.54256449028 111% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.69794460899 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.59496627751 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 123.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.657754010695 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 295.2 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 12.6804123711 55% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 26.0 16.3608247423 159% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 123.957859857 44.8134815571 277% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 135.0 76.5299724578 176% => OK
Words per sentence: 26.7142857143 16.8248392259 159% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.42857142857 4.34317383033 217% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.259577487817 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100773619458 0.0766984524023 131% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0803103201961 0.0603063233224 133% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.114120639188 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0649162701927 0.0580467560999 112% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.7 8.37731958763 187% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.09 70.7449484536 64% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 7.45979381443 180% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.31 8.71597938144 141% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.49 7.59969072165 125% => OK
difficult_words: 54.0 41.2886597938 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 8.62886597938 122% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.4 8.54432989691 145% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.