International travel has become cheaper more and more countries open their doors and more tourists go abroad for travelling. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages.
Tourism is a part and parcel of everybody life. There are various factors for surging of overseas tourism one among them is better connectivity of flights and reasonable price of air tickets. I believe that the pros of tourism outweigh the cons and explicate my views on the subsequent paragraphs.
There are myriads of positives of international tourism. The first and foremost is, infrastructural development. As tourists come in country, they need accommodation for living as well as restaurants, hotels to eat so they provide employment opportunities to local people. Also, because of tourists lot of development takes place for instance, construction of better roads and airport availability. Considering further, overseas voyage also helps in spreading feelings of brotherhood. As a person gets knowledge about culture, tradition and language of the host country which enables intercultural understanding and linguistic exchange. As a consequence, travelling helps in spreading peace and harmony among nations.
On the contrary side, the negative effects of tourism cannot be neglected. The predominant one is, an increase in crime rates. Since the voyagers carry a lot of valuable items so they are the soft targets of criminals. Moreover, sometimes traveller themselves indulge in anti-social activities such as drug dealing and in taking of drugs which disturbs the local culture and especially the youngsters get addicted to these types of activities.
To conclude, it proves that merits of tourism out shadow its demerits. So it is an educational activity which should be encouraged and people travel as per their own choice.
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- International travel has become cheaper more and more countries open their doors and more tourists go abroad for travelling. Do the advantages of increased tourism outweigh the disadvantages. 61
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, first, if, moreover, so, well, as to, for instance, such as, as well as, on the contrary
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 13.1623246493 76% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1393.0 1615.20841683 86% => OK
No of words: 253.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.50592885375 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98822939669 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.16028606628 2.80592935109 113% => OK
Unique words: 166.0 176.041082164 94% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.656126482213 0.561755894193 117% => OK
syllable_count: 433.8 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 2.10420841683 238% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.0330668254 49.4020404114 95% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.0625 106.682146367 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.8125 20.7667163134 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.875 7.06120827912 83% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 5.01903807615 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.127423316518 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.038276799019 0.084324248473 45% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0272200829026 0.0667982634062 41% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0711333725897 0.151304729494 47% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.019718520295 0.056905535591 35% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 47.79 50.2224549098 95% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.38 12.4159519038 116% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.81 8.58950901804 114% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 78.4519038076 111% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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