It is seen that small shops and local markets are losing their influence because of supermarkets and malls.
Shopping is a rudimentary need of human beings for buying day-to-day stuff or some luxury item for a special occasion. With advent of big malls,is smaller business loosing their importance?This essay attempts to reflect on this topic.
Shopping malls draw more customers to shop at the shore in their premises and the primary reason people are allured to buy from supermarket is attraction to buy from big brands that are easily available at these outlets. Generally, big brands retail their products through the shops present in the big malls. Another reason is the convenience that the shopping malls offer to the consumers such parking and private security guards.Right from a pin to plane,a supermarket offers everything a customer would need under one roof. People can watch a movie; have pleasant dining experience and, shop at a convenience shop which offers wide range and variety of products.Shopping arcades these days also, aim to offer live entertainment by inviting TV personas or host magic shows to keep little ones busy while the parent shops. Shopping precincts offers sales during festive seasons like “Christmas”, which tempts customer to shop and save huge money.
Despite these offerings, the little corner shops will never loose its importance. For those unplanned and urgent errands, one will always prefer to shop from a close by shops. People love to buy their fresh fruits and vegetables from the local shop. Further, owners of small shops offer better customer attention and give customized services to the shoppers. If some endeared item of is sold off, the sales rep would reorder them for their buyers. In many communities, a small neighborhood shop offers a place to socialize and catch up on the latest news of the town. In small towns, flea markets are open on a particular day of the week to sell specialty items sourced. These markets are frequented
by many tourists for the rare and unique items available at these markets like local handicraft.
Based on the discussion above, every market has different experience to offer to its customers. Based on each need, consumers tend to buy either from shopping center or local shop.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 795, Rule ID: ADMIT_ENJOY_VB[7]
Message: This verb is used with the gerund form: 'to saving'.
Suggestion: to saving
...ety. A working woman would look forward to save her time would prefer to shop one stop ...
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Line 5, column 61, Rule ID: LOOSE_LOSE[2]
Message: Did you mean 'lose' (= miss, waste, suffer the loss etc.)?
Suggestion: lose
...ngs, the little corner shops will never loose its importance. For those unplanned and...
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Line 5, column 711, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...nce places. These markets are frequented by many tourists for the rare and unique...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, so, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 7.85571142285 102% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 60.0 41.998997996 143% => OK
Nominalization: 10.0 8.3376753507 120% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2040.0 1615.20841683 126% => OK
No of words: 400.0 315.596192385 127% => OK
Chars per words: 5.1 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.472135955 4.20363070211 106% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64527881328 2.80592935109 94% => OK
Unique words: 227.0 176.041082164 129% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.5675 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 618.3 506.74238477 122% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 6.0 2.52805611222 237% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.76152304609 105% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 23.0 16.0721442886 143% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 28.6438927137 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 88.6956521739 106.682146367 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.3913043478 20.7667163134 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.08695652174 7.06120827912 15% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 8.67935871743 150% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 9.0 3.4128256513 264% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.23750523285 0.244688304435 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0719457181556 0.084324248473 85% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0431854224351 0.0667982634062 65% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1345067515 0.151304729494 89% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0462893651897 0.056905535591 81% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.3 13.0946893788 86% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.0 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.07 8.58950901804 94% => OK
difficult_words: 91.0 78.4519038076 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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