you have brought a new camera but when you got it home you found it had some problems.
You returned the camera and spoke to the company representative a week ago, but the camera has still not been repaired.
Write a letter to the company.
In your letter:
Introduce yourself
Explain the situation
Say what action you would like the company to take
To Whom It May Concern,
My name is Valli, and I have been a customer of your company for several years. I have confidently shopped at your premises, knowing that I would be completely taken care of in the event of a potential problem.
However, I have recently faced a predicament in dealing with your company that disappointed me greatly. To make a long story short, I had purchased a camera from your store, but upon taking it home and unboxing it, I found it to be faulty. Realizing that there always a probability of finding a faulty item at any store, I returned the camera for repair, relying on your company's immaculate after-sales services. To my chagrin, however, I am yet to hear back from the store and it has been a week since I have last spoken to them.
This is unfortunate that a great company like yours is damaging its reputation through potential errors of its representatives. I will be delighted if you either send me a new camera or refund me the entire sum I had paid for this faulty paraphernalia. If possible, get back to me at your earliest convenience.
Regards,
Valli
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, may
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 39.0 32.9175257732 118% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 26.3917525773 99% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 937.175257732 97% => OK
No of words: 197.0 206.0 96% => OK
Chars per words: 4.61421319797 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.74642080493 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.88957802474 2.54303337028 114% => OK
Unique words: 121.0 127.690721649 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.61421319797 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 290.88556701 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.41237113402 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.463917525773 431% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 12.6804123711 71% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 41.5721060328 44.8134815571 93% => OK
Chars per sentence: 101.0 76.5299724578 132% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.8888888889 16.8248392259 130% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.33333333333 4.34317383033 54% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 2.54639175258 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 1.49484536082 334% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210990740163 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0703633737456 0.0766984524023 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0486006865958 0.0603063233224 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0981775116653 0.12726935374 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0640249828629 0.0580467560999 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 8.37731958763 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 58.62 70.7449484536 83% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 7.45979381443 138% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.46 8.71597938144 109% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.69 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 41.2886597938 121% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 75.8426966292 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.75 Out of 9
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