the way a message is delivered is often more important than the message itself
I completely agree with this statement.People express their mental state or opinions by their gestures and expressions.People can understand others or judge others by the way he is speaking or letting you know.
Nowadays every person have his own mentality.People can understand the message properly only if it is conveyed in the correct way.The message might be important but the way you deliver the message also plays a vital role.People will accept the message or understand it if you deliver it properly.
For Instance,In a school,a teacher wants to correct a students behaviour because he was so arrogant with many students in the class.The teacher wants to admonish the student so that he wont repeat it again.But the way the teacher represents the message plays an important role.If the teacher also acts in an arrogant way to his student while delivering the message the student will never take that message to heart and will continue doing it forever.But if the teacher starts delivering the message in a cool and sweet manner then the student might receive the message properly and will change his behaviour.
There are many more situations where the way a message is delivered plays an important role than the message itself.For example,The government wants to carry out a new law where people will be given a fine if they don't wear helmet during driving.For delivering this message to the people government has set up some new ways where people will get to know the importance of the helmet and safety by wearing it.So people got convinced by the new law without seeing the fine intention.
I therefore close by saying that the way a message is delivered is often more important than the message itself as people will be convinced by the way the message is delivered and will understand it more clearly and accept it without any issues.This will help people to accept the process and not the result.
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- The following is a memorandum from the business manager of a television station.“Over the past year, our late-night news program has devoted increased time to national news and less time to weather and local news. During this time period, most of the co 63
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, therefore, while, for example, for instance, you know, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 19.5258426966 56% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.4196629213 105% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 14.8657303371 101% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 33.0505617978 91% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 58.6224719101 46% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1601.0 2235.4752809 72% => OK
No of words: 323.0 442.535393258 73% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.95665634675 5.05705443957 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.23936324884 4.55969084622 93% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.79385306158 2.79657885939 100% => OK
Unique words: 151.0 215.323595506 70% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.467492260062 0.4932671777 95% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 500.4 704.065955056 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.99550561798 80% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.38483146067 23% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 20.2370786517 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 64.0 23.0359550562 278% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 143.752008682 60.3974514979 238% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 320.2 118.986275619 269% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 64.6 23.4991977007 275% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 18.0 5.21951772744 345% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 19.0 7.80617977528 243% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 10.2758426966 39% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 5.13820224719 19% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 4.83258426966 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.468734031161 0.243740707755 192% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.284305612942 0.0831039109588 342% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.16113279531 0.0758088955206 213% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.284305612942 0.150359130593 189% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.16113279531 0.0667264976115 241% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 34.2 14.1392134831 242% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 14.98 48.8420337079 31% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 11.2 7.92365168539 141% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 27.1 12.1743820225 223% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 12.38 12.1639044944 102% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.16 8.38706741573 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 100.480337079 48% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 18.5 11.8971910112 155% => OK
gunning_fog: 27.6 11.2143820225 246% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 28.0 11.7820224719 238% => The average readability is very high. Good job!
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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