“Prevention is better than cure”. Out of countries health budget, a large proportion should be diverted from treatment to spending on health education and prevention measures. To what extend do you agree or disagree with this statement.
Survey depicts that number of countries are spending huge amount of money on treatment in all over the world that should be spend on education, health and prevention measures. My inclination supports the statement that as compare to treatment spending money on health and education is far beneficial which automatically will de-escalate the ratio of unhealthiness.
To begin with, I would like to outline the few advantages of spending money on health, education and prevention measures that eventually will be worthwhile in case of proper measures on above mentioned points. Furthermore, one of the obvious advantages is to be relentless improvement especially in education sector which is quite essential for every country. Although, it is truly said by the pedagogical experts that health is wealth which always play most significant role in every individual's life. Henceforth, in order to be enhancing the quality of life government need to invest on health and education.
Furthermore, in order to curb the tendency of society from treatment to health and education government need to spread the awareness widely as well as implement these all measures which could be possible outcomes for the nations. For instance, provide healthy and hygienic food, implement sanctions on those machineries that produce pollution in huge quantity as well as separate the area in case of requirement and strive to build green environment that actually overcomes these all hazardous. Lastly, in the case of emergency treatment procedure should be accessible widely in hospitals for handling crucial movement.
To sum up, it is the responsibility of government to protect the environment as well as need be anxious about the nation that actually is a part of the country wherein they always stand for the country. Hence, in order to make better health government need to evaluate and implement these all things.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 125, Rule ID: SHOULD_BE_DO[1]
Message: Did you mean 'spent'?
Suggestion: spent
...nt in all over the world that should be spend on education, health and prevention mea...
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Line 3, column 361, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “Although” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...h is quite essential for every country. Although, it is truly said by the pedagogical ex...
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Line 3, column 486, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'individuals'' or 'individual's'?
Suggestion: individuals'; individual's
...ays play most significant role in every individuals life. Henceforth, in order to be enhanc...
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Line 7, column 302, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...valuate and implement these all things.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, furthermore, hence, if, lastly, so, well, while, for instance, as well as, to begin with, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 15.0 13.1623246493 114% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 12.0 7.30460921844 164% => OK
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 52.0 41.998997996 124% => OK
Nominalization: 28.0 8.3376753507 336% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1612.0 1615.20841683 100% => OK
No of words: 301.0 315.596192385 95% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35548172757 5.12529762239 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.16525528304 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.98250066325 2.80592935109 106% => OK
Unique words: 157.0 176.041082164 89% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.521594684385 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 501.3 506.74238477 99% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 50.2961477584 49.4020404114 102% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.545454545 106.682146367 137% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3636363636 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.90909090909 7.06120827912 140% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.225973951754 0.244688304435 92% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0915649342971 0.084324248473 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0672901397125 0.0667982634062 101% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.143452832862 0.151304729494 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0730320058465 0.056905535591 128% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 17.5 13.0946893788 134% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.61 50.2224549098 71% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 15.0 11.3001002004 133% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.1 12.4159519038 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.91 8.58950901804 104% => OK
difficult_words: 75.0 78.4519038076 96% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 15.5 9.78957915832 158% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 15.0 10.7795591182 139% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.