Some people feel that entertainers(eg film stars , pop musicians sports stars ) are paid too much money . do you agree or disagree? Which other types of jobs should be highly paid?
Today's people's perception is that entertainers are paid too much money - I totally agree with this statement. Just because they entertain people and do nothing more than that; it's not justified that they are eligible for more pay.
In today's world off busy life style of people the entertainment industry plays a very essential role for reducing stress from individual's life.It has taken a very significant place in people's life. Without sports or entertainment they can not imagine themselves. These famous personalities gets so much attention and everybody is so curios about their personal life, that's why these people feel they are important for the society and should be paid well. But we people should understand they are also normal human being and have common abilities.
Their absence in any sport or cinema will not harm any person's life because it is just for entertainment purpose. In their place some other personality can do the similar performance. for instance if brad Pitt is not playing any part in any cinema it may just impact the film's overall revenue.
There are various types of jobs by which many lives are being saved (eg defense personal) they just keep their life at risk to save the nation, secondly the doctors saves patient's life, thirdly fire fighters they put their life at risk for saving the people from fire, the rescue team rescue people from regions which are hit by natural disasters or any other dangerous situations.
in conclusion I would agree that these famous personalities gets unnecessary attention and money comaprison to those who choose risky profession to save others life without any hesitation.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, second, secondly, so, third, thirdly, well, for instance, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.48453608247 187% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 4.92783505155 142% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 5.05154639175 178% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.03092783505 231% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 11.0 3.85567010309 285% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1384.0 937.175257732 148% => OK
No of words: 272.0 206.0 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.08823529412 4.54256449028 112% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.06108636974 3.78020617076 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.58267475923 2.54303337028 102% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 127.690721649 131% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.613970588235 0.622605031667 99% => OK
syllable_count: 437.4 290.88556701 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 4.0 1.44329896907 277% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 24.0 16.3608247423 147% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 85.7154624083 44.8134815571 191% => OK
Chars per sentence: 125.818181818 76.5299724578 164% => OK
Words per sentence: 24.7272727273 16.8248392259 147% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.27272727273 4.34317383033 190% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.94845360825 25% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.210906981338 0.216113520407 98% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.089354862703 0.0766984524023 117% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0597209266965 0.0603063233224 99% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.115721753389 0.12726935374 91% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0504522268165 0.0580467560999 87% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.9 8.37731958763 178% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 47.12 70.7449484536 67% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 3.82989690722 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.7 7.45979381443 170% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.54 8.71597938144 144% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.54 7.59969072165 112% => OK
difficult_words: 64.0 41.2886597938 155% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 8.62886597938 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 11.6 8.54432989691 136% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 8.15463917526 159% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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