the graph below gives information about total oil use of 4 main consumers from 2009 to 2030
The given line cIt is obvious that the oil consumption of china and middle east increased slightly while that of the us and western europe & japan declined considerably during the period shown.
In 2009, the amount of oil used by the us was the biggest with just over 9 million barrels per day, followed by that of western europe & japan with approximately 4 million. In the same year, china and middle east only burned some 2 million per day. In 2015, even though the us’s oil consumption reached a peak at around 10 million barrels, it is expected that this figure will decrease significantly to just over 6 million barrels in 2030hart illustrates the daily amount of oil consumed by four regions between 2009 and 2030.
In addition, before falling to about 3.5 million in 2030, the number of oil barrels consumed in china will double in 2025, which makes this country become the second biggest oil consumer. At the end of the period shown, the daily numbers of barrels used by western europe & japan and middle east are projected to be around 2 million.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 250, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ast only burned some 2 million per day. In 2015, even though the us's oil con...
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Line 3, column 509, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...y amount of oil consumed by four regions between 2009 and 2030. In addition, bef...
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Line 4, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...y four regions between 2009 and 2030. In addition, before falling to about 3.5 m...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, second, so, while, in addition
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 10.0 5.60731707317 178% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 35.0 33.7804878049 104% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.97073170732 76% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 880.0 965.302439024 91% => OK
No of words: 185.0 196.424390244 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.75675675676 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.68801715136 3.73543355544 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.46184096411 2.65546596893 93% => OK
Unique words: 103.0 106.607317073 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556756756757 0.547539520022 102% => OK
syllable_count: 258.3 283.868780488 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 1.0 1.53170731707 65% => OK
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 8.94146341463 67% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 30.0 22.4926829268 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 61.9634749044 43.030603864 144% => OK
Chars per sentence: 146.666666667 112.824112599 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 30.8333333333 22.9334400587 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.66666666667 5.23603664747 108% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 3.83414634146 78% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 3.0 1.69756097561 177% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.09268292683 73% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.146456537001 0.215688989381 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0752045680493 0.103423049105 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579449803668 0.0843802449381 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0985154685125 0.15604864568 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0478825467171 0.0819641961636 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.4 13.2329268293 124% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 57.95 61.2550243902 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 12.6 10.3012195122 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.92 11.4140731707 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.69 8.06136585366 95% => OK
difficult_words: 30.0 40.7170731707 74% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 11.4329268293 114% => OK
gunning_fog: 14.0 10.9970731707 127% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.0658536585 117% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.