Nowadays environmental problems are too big to be managed by individual person or countries. In other words, it is an international problem.
To what extent do you agree or disagree?
In the current scenario, the world has suffered from various issues, out of which the most burning menace is the environmental threat. Although, it is often argued that it is so serious and colossal issue that could be managed by international bodies only rather than any nation or an individual, I believe that this problem could be solved by a conscious efforts by people of nation and intervention of global committee is needed for some selected issues only.
To begin with, the biggest challenge in front of world is an ever-increasing population.Eventually, people use more vehicles to commute routinely which increases not only air pollution but also noise pollution. To curb its detrimental effects, it is matter of fact that, no one can do better than local people and government. To be more precise, stern rules ought to be introduced by local bureaucrats and its strict legislation is sole responsibility of the citizens only. Moreover, any initiatives of either local or international body will get success only if it is well accepted and supported by local pupils.
Admittedly, a global issue, such as space pollution which requires intervention of global body. To be more specific, this problem is so massive that seems impossible to be managed by one or two nations. Moreover, rules and regulations from any global management team will certainly curtail its negative effects in long way. For an example, as per article published in the global issue journal, the UNO- United Nations Organization has introduced rules to stop any reactor experiments in 2015 and nowadays these result in reduction of space pollution level.
In conclusion, it is fact that nowadays the burgeoning of environment issues is the biggest challenge. While certain school of thought believe that these are so big to be resolved by one country or person, instead, it is considered as an international issue, I think that, except certain problems, all could be easily managed by serious efforts by local people and government.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Eventually
... world is an ever-increasing population.Eventually, people use more vehicles to commute ro...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, while, i think, in conclusion, such as, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 23.0 24.0651302605 96% => OK
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 14.0 8.3376753507 168% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1703.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 328.0 315.596192385 104% => OK
Chars per words: 5.19207317073 5.12529762239 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.25567506705 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.06764287004 2.80592935109 109% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.545731707317 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 539.1 506.74238477 106% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 2.10420841683 95% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 16.0721442886 75% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 72.4620590378 49.4020404114 147% => OK
Chars per sentence: 141.916666667 106.682146367 133% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.3333333333 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.33333333333 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 8.67935871743 69% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.16446533326 0.244688304435 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0555900473066 0.084324248473 66% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0487180588689 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1041796588 0.151304729494 69% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0321666802196 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.7 13.0946893788 128% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 7.44779559118 150% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.12 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.26 8.58950901804 108% => OK
difficult_words: 89.0 78.4519038076 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 9.78957915832 194% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.