Write a letter to a friend. You have borrowed something from your friend and it got damage.
1. Apologize for damaging the product
2. Explain what happened
3. Say how you are going to fix the issue
Dear Raj,
How are you my friend, I am writing this letter to inform that your Laptop is broken. Unfortunately, yesterday my daughter through it from the table. Although, power connection is working, the screen is not displaying anything. I am really sorry for the loss.
During evening tea time, I left it on my table after work. My daughter came to me and asked me to open the laptop, so that she could watch a movie. Later, while sitting in the next room I heard the sound of fallen something and when I came out, it was your laptop and my DVD’s scattered on the floor.
I want you to give me some time, around 1 week to fix this. I will visit the repair factory tomorrow and discuss the issue with technician and I have already registered my issue with the laptop company but I will need your permission to make the repair as the product is purchased in your name. Therefore, I insist you to come with me tomorrow at dell office.
I believe the problem will fixed soon and again apologize for the inconvenience.
With regards,
Vishal Bhat
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 17, column 28, Rule ID: DID_BASEFORM[1]
Message: The verb 'will' requires the base form of the verb: 'fix'
Suggestion: fix
...ffice. I believe the problem will fixed soon and again apologize for the inconv...
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Line 21, column 14, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...or the inconvenience. With regards, Vishal Bhat
^^^^
Line 23, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ience. With regards, Vishal Bhat
^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, really, so, therefore, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 4.92783505155 101% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 36.0 32.9175257732 109% => OK
Preposition: 23.0 26.3917525773 87% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 3.85567010309 52% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 192.0 206.0 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.61979166667 4.54256449028 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.72241943641 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.50116617766 2.54303337028 98% => OK
Unique words: 122.0 127.690721649 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.635416666667 0.622605031667 102% => OK
syllable_count: 265.5 290.88556701 91% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 1.44329896907 208% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 54.9036403367 44.8134815571 123% => OK
Chars per sentence: 73.9166666667 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.0 16.8248392259 95% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.75 4.34317383033 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 2.54639175258 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 7.41237113402 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 1.49484536082 268% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.94845360825 152% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.191437238032 0.216113520407 89% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0609182407895 0.0766984524023 79% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0689842170971 0.0603063233224 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.113913615465 0.12726935374 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0598513473478 0.0580467560999 103% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.3 8.37731958763 99% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.22 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.14 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 33.0 41.2886597938 80% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.