The following appeared in a magazine article about planning for retirement.
"Clearview should be a top choice for anyone seeking a place to retire, because it has spectacular natural beauty and a consistent climate. Another advantage is that housing costs in Clearview have fallen significantly during the past year, and taxes remain lower than those in neighboring towns. Moreover, Clearview's mayor promises many new programs to improve schools, streets, and public services. And best of all, retirees in Clearview can also expect excellent health care as they grow older, since the number of physicians in the area is far greater than the national average."
Write a response in which you discuss what specific evidence is needed to evaluate the argument and explain how the evidence would weaken or strengthen the argument.
The argument advocates for Clearview as a top choice for retirees based on its natural elements and beauty, falling housing costs and taxes, city improvements, and excellent healthcare due to the number of physicians in the area. Although plausible, the argument does not include sufficient evidence to be properly evaluated, and such evidence may severely hamper the conclusion.
Firstly, the argument suggests that Clearview should be a top choice due to the natural beauty and consistent climate. However, there is not evidence presented to ascertain a positive fit between retirees and nature/climate. "Consistent climate" does not parallel with "good climate." There could be a chance that it consistently rains in Clearview. If this is the case, it is not feasible for retirees to live here because of the complications associated with the rain. Elderly folk often find it difficult to live in rainy settings because it makes everyday actions for more complicated and they become more susceptible to sickness in such a climate. Additionally, natural beauty may refer to views of mountain tops or rivers, but retirees could prefer to gaze at downtown skylines instead. If this is the case, then nature would not be an important factor for retirees looking for a place to live. Thus, the conclusion would be undermined if either of these pieces of evidence proves to be true.
Secondly, the magazine article claims that falling house prices make Clearview an ideal location to retire, without presenting the actual cost of the houses. If housing costs in Clearview were initially extremely pricey, these falling costs may still be expensive, making it unaffordable for retirees. Additionally, these costs are not compared to other retirement cities, so it is impossible to judge whether these costs are representative of such towns. If housing costs are falling, but are still significantly higher than other retirement towns, then Clearview would not be a top location for retirees. If either of these circumstances holds water, than the argument is severely weakened.
Lastly, the argument claims that elderly folk in Clearview will receive excellent healthcare since there are more physicians in the area than the national average. However, no evidence is provided to ascertain what types of physicians are in the area and whether they work in the area. If the majority of physicians located in Clearview specialize in pediatrics, then it is unlikely that they will be helping the retirees. Additionally, physicians located in this area may travel to work in other cities, again suggesting that they would not be able to assist the retirees. Lastly, the number of physicians does not correlate to the number of facilities in the area. If there is only one hospital and a few small clinics, retirees may have to suffer long wait times in order to receive medical assistance. Thus, equating the number of physicians in the area to excellent healthcare seems far-fetched. With any of this evidence, the argument that retired people should move to Clearview since they will receive exceptional healthcare is hampered.
Although presented plausibly, the argument is not cogent enough to ascertain whether Clearview should be a top location for retired people to live. More evidence is needed in order to evaluate the argument effectively, including the fit between retirees and the climate/nature, the housing costs relative to other towns, and whether physicians in the area are actually helping the retired people in Clearview. With this evidence, the argument becomes far more conclusive.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 654, Rule ID: COMMA_THAN[1]
Message: Did you mean 'then'?
Suggestion: then
...her of these circumstances holds water, than the argument is severely weakened. ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, may, second, secondly, so, still, then, thus
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 31.0 19.6327345309 158% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 17.0 12.9520958084 131% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 13.6137724551 51% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 30.0 28.8173652695 104% => OK
Preposition: 70.0 55.5748502994 126% => OK
Nominalization: 23.0 16.3942115768 140% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 3065.0 2260.96107784 136% => OK
No of words: 572.0 441.139720559 130% => OK
Chars per words: 5.35839160839 5.12650576532 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.89045207381 4.56307096286 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.95674184922 2.78398813304 106% => OK
Unique words: 238.0 204.123752495 117% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.416083916084 0.468620217663 89% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 972.0 705.55239521 138% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.59920159681 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 4.96107784431 60% => OK
Article: 11.0 8.76447105788 126% => OK
Subordination: 10.0 2.70958083832 369% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 5.0 1.67365269461 299% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 3.0 4.22255489022 71% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 19.7664670659 132% => OK
Sentence length: 22.0 22.8473053892 96% => OK
Sentence length SD: 41.4150588626 57.8364921388 72% => OK
Chars per sentence: 117.884615385 119.503703932 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.0 23.324526521 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.92307692308 5.70786347227 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 5.15768463074 97% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.25449101796 19% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 8.20758483034 146% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 11.0 6.88822355289 160% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 4.67664670659 64% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258608319621 0.218282227539 118% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.080019630907 0.0743258471296 108% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0786106211558 0.0701772020484 112% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.15735034784 0.128457276422 122% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0893260989918 0.0628817314937 142% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.8 14.3799401198 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 48.3550499002 84% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.1628742515 123% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 12.197005988 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.81 12.5979740519 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.29 8.32208582834 100% => OK
difficult_words: 129.0 98.500998004 131% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 12.3882235529 93% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 11.1389221557 97% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 11.9071856287 118% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 66.67 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 4.0 Out of 6
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.