At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with the number of older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages ?
In today's era, human resource is one of the significant factors, which determines any country's growth and prosperity but very astonishingly some countries have more adults than old people which in turn results imbalance in the proportion of population as well as in other many realms. With the statement, I am going to present some advantages and disadvantages of this issue.
To begin with, it is apparent that young people are more creative, dynamic and more passionate to do manifold things, therefore proportion of more adults in any country can amount to plethora advantages. Firstly, young people can assist in every domain, and thereby it can be very lucrative for the country because they are capable in terms of both physical and mental power, which is the need of today's time. On the top of that, few old people can never be a hindrance for any country because that void can be filled by young people, consequently old people can make those young people more sharp and cognizant by their experience. For instance, it has been seen that country like India has a proportion of more than 65% young people, who are under age 35, which indicates that India has huge potential to grow and can acquire zenith of economic success easily by utilizing youth power.
On the other hand, it is also true that old people are considered as a backbone for any country because of their experience and ability to cope with any situation effectively, correspondingly every country should seriously pay heed over this imbalance on account of myriad reasons. Firstly, old people are the asset of the society, as they pass their valuable knowledge in terms of cultures, traditions, values and many more, to young generation which later prove very beneficial for the young people. In addition, there are certain specific professions such as teaching, research and so on, where old people can play a monumental role because they are more impatient and resilient as compare to younger people.
In conclusion, I opine that contribution of both younger and older people is required for the development of any country, thus every country should utilize the skills of these people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, if, so, therefore, thus, well, for instance, in addition, in conclusion, such as, as well as, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 6.10837438424 180% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 8.36945812808 155% => OK
Relative clauses : 14.0 5.94088669951 236% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 23.0 20.9802955665 110% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 31.9359605911 144% => OK
Nominalization: 16.0 5.75862068966 278% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1790.0 1207.87684729 148% => OK
No of words: 354.0 242.827586207 146% => Less content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.05649717514 5.00649968141 101% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.33761313653 3.92707691288 110% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66581069284 2.71678728327 98% => OK
Unique words: 188.0 139.433497537 135% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.531073446328 0.580463131201 91% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 567.0 379.143842365 150% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 4.6157635468 108% => OK
Article: 0.0 1.56157635468 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.931034482759 107% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 3.65517241379 219% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6551724138 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 35.0 20.5024630542 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.9245606626 50.4703680194 103% => OK
Chars per sentence: 179.0 104.977214359 171% => OK
Words per sentence: 35.4 20.9669160288 169% => OK
Discourse Markers: 15.3 7.25397266985 211% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.33497536946 75% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 6.9802955665 115% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 2.91625615764 34% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.169680836536 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0845612992567 0.0925447433944 91% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0546067486983 0.071462118173 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.112626001596 0.151781067708 74% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.03555823108 0.0609392437508 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.1 12.6369458128 159% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 35.95 53.1260098522 68% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 16.9 10.9458128079 154% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.66 11.5310837438 110% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.25 8.32886699507 111% => OK
difficult_words: 87.0 55.0591133005 158% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 14.5 9.94827586207 146% => OK
gunning_fog: 16.0 10.3980295567 154% => OK
text_standard: 17.0 10.5123152709 162% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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