Most cultures encourage individuals to sacrifice a large part of their own personalities in order
to be like other people. Thus, most people are afraid to think or behave differently because
they do not want to be excluded.
The speaker claims about the conformity at the expense of individuality on the first prong and in the second prong he states the reason behind it. People inherently nurture a fear of not getting excluded from the society they dwell in. So, stay accord with the society they imitate others to live and most of the time give up their own prevailing nature of lifestyles- such as, belief, mores, eating habit and so forth. So, I strongly support the above assertion.
To support my argument, I would like to cast some reasons with worthy examples. As, I said in the former para people have a fear of getting pariah from the society, I would like to elaborate it in my way. For instance, think about a person who lived in a remote village in UP, India has recently come Mumbai for the sake of living. In that very own village, he has his own culture of living but he is confronting with very opposite mores from the time he came to Mumbai. In Mumbai, people are much liberal and have some very own cultures to live with. That person who left his village and came to live in the huge city is now finding himself unfit with the day-to-day lifestyle of that city’s dweller. In this case, that village people will definitely let go his prevailing art of living to survive in Mumbai, otherwise, he would be remarked as ineligible.
We, the people apparently like to imitate others. A child who is growing up, is learning everything coping with the ways elders are performing. An elder one can be replaced with that growing child. A destitute, who somehow has become affluent mimics the way of living of the intrinsic affluent. That recently being rich one will purchase a luxurious home, some expensive cars, will attend many parties just to become his contemporary rich ones. He inevitably lives in a fear of getting excluded from the rich society if he doesn’t pursue a lifestyle like those riches.
Aside from the above reasons, there are some cultures, those don’t encourage people to sacrifice their own personalities. We can think about the villages in this case. A strong form of conformity can be found there. In spite of that people don’t ever tend to sacrifice their own belief, forms of living, mores. They preserve their very own diverse lifestyle while living in peace with each other.
To sum up, not all culture acts alike. People differ from culture to culture. A culture can be found where people eat every single thing, in the same-time, another culture just prohibits many of that former culture to do. To maintain the balance, people tend to stand apart from their very own personalities, though in not all cases.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
apparently, but, first, if, second, so, well, while, apart from, for instance, such as, in spite of, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 19.5258426966 61% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 12.4196629213 81% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 14.8657303371 40% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 41.0 33.0505617978 124% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 82.0 58.6224719101 140% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 12.9106741573 31% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2204.0 2235.4752809 99% => OK
No of words: 461.0 442.535393258 104% => OK
Chars per words: 4.78091106291 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.63367139033 4.55969084622 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49646443734 2.79657885939 89% => OK
Unique words: 234.0 215.323595506 109% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.507592190889 0.4932671777 103% => OK
syllable_count: 715.5 704.065955056 102% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 13.0 6.24550561798 208% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 7.0 4.99550561798 140% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 3.10617977528 32% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.77640449438 0% => OK
Preposition: 9.0 4.38483146067 205% => Less preposition wanted as sentence beginnings.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 26.0 20.2370786517 128% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 42.1591974425 60.3974514979 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 84.7692307692 118.986275619 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7307692308 23.4991977007 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.23076923077 5.21951772744 81% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 0.0 7.80617977528 0% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.83258426966 207% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.211535111993 0.243740707755 87% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0598410666912 0.0831039109588 72% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0427800870082 0.0758088955206 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.124955052904 0.150359130593 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0516724644232 0.0667264976115 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.9 14.1392134831 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 54.22 48.8420337079 111% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 12.1743820225 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.15 12.1639044944 83% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.94 8.38706741573 95% => OK
difficult_words: 101.0 100.480337079 101% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.8971910112 67% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.7820224719 85% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 58.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.5 Out of 6
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