recentlly smith corp. shows willingness to buy some part of land which are part of youngtown wildlife preserve.thier plan is to make hotel and as per thier bombastic claim it will benificial for us because lot of new tourist will visit sanctury and it will also boost other small business of town,but our youngtown wildlife sanctuary is already famous for magnificent bird population and lots of tourists already do visit to our sanctuary,making hotel here may not increase touristum in sanctuary but it will increase profit of hotel for sure.
allowing hotel construction in sanctuary means allowing privatization of sancturay and allowing corporations to ruined sanctuary, like if smith corporation make lots profit from this hotel it will gain attention other corporations and they will also willing to built hotels here and more number of hotels in sanctury means more lessen the amount of trees,plant and other sancturian creatur. it and at end of this corporational fights will ruin sanctuary.
this hotels will full all facilities like transportations,food,guieds and etc,which are main business of local pepople so it will not benit for community and native pepole,even many tourist will prefer hotel packages which include all this facilites on cheape cost and it will be harmful for community rather then benifit, but for it will benifits hotels to boost their profit
recentlly smith corp. shows willingness to buy some part of land which are part of youngtown wildlife preserve.thier plan is to make hotel and as per thier bombastic claim it will benificial for us because lot of new tourist will visit sanctury and it will also boost other small business of town,but our youngtown wildlife sanctuary is already famous for magnificent bird population and lots of tourists already do visit to our sanctuary,making hotel here may not increase touristum in sanctuary but it will increase profit of hotel for sure.
allowing hotel construction in sanctuary means allowing privatization of sancturay and allowing corporations to ruined sanctuary, like if smith corporation make lots profit from this hotel it will gain attention other corporations and they will also willing to built hotels here and more number of hotels in sanctury means more lessen the amount of trees,plant and other sancturian creatur. it and at end of this corporational fights will ruin sanctuary.
this hotels will full all facilities like transportations,food,guieds and etc,which are main business of local pepople so it will not benit for community and native pepole,even many tourist will prefer hotel packages which include all this facilites on cheape cost and it will be harmful for community rather then benifit, but for it will benifits hotels to boost their profit
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, may, so, then
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 19.6327345309 25% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 12.9520958084 100% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 11.1786427146 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 3.0 13.6137724551 22% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 28.8173652695 59% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 55.5748502994 45% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 5.0 16.3942115768 30% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1165.0 2260.96107784 52% => More number of characters wanted.
No of words: 220.0 441.139720559 50% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.29545454545 5.12650576532 103% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.85128510684 4.56307096286 84% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.18215582624 2.78398813304 114% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 204.123752495 61% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.563636363636 0.468620217663 120% => OK
syllable_count: 353.7 705.55239521 50% => syllable counts are too short.
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59920159681 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 4.96107784431 40% => OK
Article: 0.0 8.76447105788 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.70958083832 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 2.0 1.67365269461 119% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.22255489022 24% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 5.0 19.7664670659 25% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 44.0 22.8473053892 193% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 196.67170615 57.8364921388 340% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 233.0 119.503703932 195% => OK
Words per sentence: 44.0 23.324526521 189% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.6 5.70786347227 98% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 5.15768463074 58% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 15.0 5.25449101796 285% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.20758483034 37% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 6.88822355289 15% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.67664670659 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.496713998366 0.218282227539 228% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.242289085521 0.0743258471296 326% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.186214376713 0.0701772020484 265% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.333207605972 0.128457276422 259% => Maybe some contents are duplicated.
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.229008955011 0.0628817314937 364% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 25.5 14.3799401198 177% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 26.82 48.3550499002 55% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 13.0 7.1628742515 181% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 20.5 12.197005988 168% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.35 12.5979740519 114% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.41 8.32208582834 113% => OK
difficult_words: 50.0 98.500998004 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 19.0 12.3882235529 153% => OK
gunning_fog: 19.6 11.1389221557 176% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 11.9071856287 109% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum four paragraphs wanted.
Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 33.33 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 2.0 Out of 6
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