A friend has agreed to stay in your flat (apartment) and look after it while you are away. You want to give your friend some information about the flat.
Write a letter to this friend. In your letter:
Give information about the flat
Provide any important instructions
Say what he/she should do if there are any problems
Dear John,
I hope you're doing great. I am writing to thank you for looking after my apartment while I am gone for the holidays this coming week. I knew I could count on you for important matters.
there are some things I want you to know before you move here temporarily. For instance, the flat is on the 1st floor so you won't have any problems going up and down every day. Also, the apartment complex has ample parking space and you wouldn't have to worry about parking your truck.
I have already notified the apartment union and close neighbors about your temporary stay. there have been a number of burglaries in the past month so you have to be vigilant of trespassers. Don't forget to secure all door locking mechanisms which I installed last month.
there is a first-aid box in case of minor medical emergencies in my room. if there is a fire incident, please find two fire extinguishers in the storage room but only use them if you really believe the fire could be controlled, otherwise, save yourself first.
I hope you will enjoy your stay. Should there be an accident or emergency, notify me on my mobile number.
Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear John, I hope youre doing great. I am writing to thank you ...
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Line 5, column 135, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...gone for the holidays this coming week. I knew I could count on you for important...
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Line 9, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...ount on you for important matters. there are some things I want you to know befo...
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Line 9, column 238, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: wouldn't
...complex has ample parking space and you wouldnt have to worry about parking your truck....
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Line 13, column 92, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...se neighbors about your temporary stay. there have been a number of burglaries in the...
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Line 13, column 192, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: Don't
...you have to be vigilant of trespassers. Dont forget to secure all door locking mecha...
^^^^
Line 17, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: There
...sms which I installed last month. there is a first-aid box in case of minor med...
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Line 17, column 75, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: If
...f minor medical emergencies in my room. if there is a fire incident, please find t...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, look, really, so, while, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 32.9175257732 85% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 966.0 937.175257732 103% => OK
No of words: 205.0 206.0 100% => OK
Chars per words: 4.71219512195 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.78388967377 3.78020617076 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47046082352 2.54303337028 97% => OK
Unique words: 136.0 127.690721649 107% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.663414634146 0.622605031667 107% => OK
syllable_count: 293.4 290.88556701 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 9.13402061856 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 0.824742268041 243% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 40.074229594 44.8134815571 89% => OK
Chars per sentence: 74.3076923077 76.5299724578 97% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.7692307692 16.8248392259 94% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.53846153846 4.34317383033 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 2.54639175258 314% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 10.0 7.41237113402 135% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.49484536082 67% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.258990472195 0.216113520407 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.083626513501 0.0766984524023 109% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0711031003951 0.0603063233224 118% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.133096763377 0.12726935374 105% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0707468046319 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.6 8.37731958763 103% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 73.17 70.7449484536 103% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.8 7.45979381443 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.08 7.59969072165 93% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.