In some countries, many more people are choosing to live alone than in the past. What are the reasons for this?
In the past, people were staying together in a family, whereas nowadays they preferred to stay on their own. This essay will discuss the reason for this, followed by a conclusion at the end.
The main reason people prefer to stay alone is that they yearn for freedom because a person can do whatever he wants to do in the house since no other members are there to lecture them when they live apart. It is to say that while staying with other members in the house, individuals can not live life as per their preference; Given that if one is living alone, then he can do all the activities he desires, such as playing loud music, eating anywhere in the house, and parting late night. Thus restriction-free life with no one’s interference is possible when one stays lonely in his apartment.
Another reason is that the economic condition of an individual has improved in recent years, which means they can now support themselves and be independent. While in the recent past this was not possible, people depended on each other because the income of an individual was not enough because of limited earnings of a person as the economy of many countries were not performing well, this is not the case now. Take India; For example, more and more people stay alone and work away from their cities as they get excellent employment opportunities and a good salary. As a result, they can afford to live alone with a much better lifestyle than they used to live.
To conclude, while in the past people stayed with their families, nowadays a sem of people prefer to stay alone because not only they can financially support them but also they want privacy in their life.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 491, Rule ID: SENT_START_CONJUNCTIVE_LINKING_ADVERB_COMMA[1]
Message: Did you forget a comma after a conjunctive/linking adverb?
Suggestion: Thus,
...e in the house, and parting late night. Thus restriction-free life with no one'...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, thus, well, whereas, while, for example, such as, as a result
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 7.85571142285 89% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 10.4138276553 58% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 30.0 24.0651302605 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 39.0 41.998997996 93% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1374.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 294.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.67346938776 5.12529762239 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14082457966 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.4795078511 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 161.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.547619047619 0.561755894193 97% => OK
syllable_count: 436.5 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 16.0721442886 62% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 29.0 20.2975951904 143% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 65.6253761894 49.4020404114 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.4 106.682146367 129% => OK
Words per sentence: 29.4 20.7667163134 142% => OK
Discourse Markers: 8.6 7.06120827912 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 8.67935871743 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.9879759519 75% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.4128256513 59% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.235131073531 0.244688304435 96% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.100973313593 0.084324248473 120% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0579206085242 0.0667982634062 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.155417186018 0.151304729494 103% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0626516474685 0.056905535591 110% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 15.3 13.0946893788 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 50.5 50.2224549098 101% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.4 11.3001002004 119% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.4 12.4159519038 84% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.14 8.58950901804 95% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 13.0 9.78957915832 133% => OK
gunning_fog: 13.6 10.1190380762 134% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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