You recently finished studying at a university in another country where you shared a
house with a fellow student. Something urgent came up while your housemate was
away on a short trip and you had to leave without saying goodbye
. In your letter
• Apologise for leaving without saying goodbye
• Explain why you have to leave
Dear Marry,
I hope this finds you well. Sorry I had to leave in such a hurry without goodbye. Something urgent came up at home -my grandmother got sick and I had to be taken to hospital. Everything’s fine now though.
By the way, I hope you experience nice time in your vacation. i’m totally aware of your adventurous attitude, So if you’ve enough time, please write me some about your trip and send me some photos to my email address. I hope you found the money which I left on the fridge for paying electricity bills. Actually, I was considering if you’re not doing any special thing, maybe you could come and visit me during winter holiday. you could stay in the guest room in our house. I really love to show you the picturesque sights of Iran.
Anyway, I just wanted to say how much I satisfied being your housemate. I know I was a little messy many times, but i’m thanks you for being tolerant . well, I’d better be going now. Keep in touch and don’t forget my invitation for the winter holiday.
Regard,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 9, column 63, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: I&apos
... experience nice time in your vacation. i'm totally aware of your adventurous att...
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Line 9, column 418, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...thing, maybe you could come and visit me during winter holiday. you could stay in...
^^
Line 9, column 443, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: You
...me and visit me during winter holiday. you could stay in the guest room in our hou...
^^^
Line 13, column 155, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...t i'm thanks you for being tolerant . well, I'd better be going now. Kee...
^^
Line 13, column 158, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Well
...'m thanks you for being tolerant . well, I'd better be going now. Keep in ...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, anyway, but, if, may, really, so, well, by the way
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.48453608247 80% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 34.0 32.9175257732 103% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 893.0 937.175257732 95% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.72486772487 4.54256449028 104% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63694715622 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 134.0 127.690721649 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.708994708995 0.622605031667 114% => OK
syllable_count: 270.0 290.88556701 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 12.6804123711 118% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 36.497427611 44.8134815571 81% => OK
Chars per sentence: 59.5333333333 76.5299724578 78% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.6 16.8248392259 75% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.0 4.34317383033 92% => OK
Paragraphs: 3.0 4.29896907216 70% => More paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 7.41237113402 148% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.261213940262 0.216113520407 121% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0808203551779 0.0766984524023 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0545697114606 0.0603063233224 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.172417247334 0.12726935374 135% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0709052939413 0.0580467560999 122% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.1 8.37731958763 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 76.22 70.7449484536 108% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.6 7.45979381443 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.21 8.71597938144 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.16 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 35.0 41.2886597938 85% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.