Write a letter to your friend inviting him/her to your family party. In your letter
– Explain why you are organizing the party.
– Describe what you are planning to do.
– Say how important it is to have your friend at the party.
Hi Yaman,
I hope my letter finds you very well. I just wanted to invite you to attend my father birthday next week on 22th of November in our house’s garden. I’d really be grateful if you cold make it.
As we discussed the last time we spoke, my brothers and I decided to make this party more special for him. Thus, we contacted one of the famous birthday planners to organize this event. we also have invited all of his friends to join his special day. The buffet will be consisted of various international dishes and finally we are planing to bring a local band but still we didn’t choose yet.
As you may know, all of us considered you as a member of our family, that’s why, we are waiting for you to come and even to help us during our special occasion. Please feel free to invite your girlfriend or anyone you would love to engage with.
hope to see you then!
Thanks,
Bilal
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hi Yaman, I hope my letter finds you very well. I ...
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Suggestion: could
...den. I'd really be grateful if you cold make it. As we discussed...
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Suggestion: We
...rthday planners to organize this event. we also have invited all of his friends to...
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Suggestion: Hope
...uld love to engage with. hope to see you then! Thanks,...
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Suggestion:
... to see you then! Thanks, Bilal
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...then! Thanks, Bilal
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, if, may, really, so, still, then, thus, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 4.0 7.48453608247 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 4.92783505155 61% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 21.0 26.3917525773 80% => OK
Nominalization: 0.0 3.85567010309 0% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 810.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 167.0 206.0 81% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.8502994012 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.59483629437 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.39350238561 2.54303337028 94% => OK
Unique words: 113.0 127.690721649 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.676646706587 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 230.4 290.88556701 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 16.3608247423 98% => OK
Sentence length SD: 37.5733948426 44.8134815571 84% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.0 76.5299724578 106% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7 16.8248392259 99% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.4 4.34317383033 147% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.157311910873 0.216113520407 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0632160926082 0.0766984524023 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.045346169116 0.0603063233224 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0951512723095 0.12726935374 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0395799890856 0.0580467560999 68% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.8 8.37731958763 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 70.7449484536 102% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 7.45979381443 97% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.55 8.71597938144 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.36 7.59969072165 97% => OK
difficult_words: 31.0 41.2886597938 75% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 8.54432989691 98% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.