Your friend wrote you a letter asking for advice on their parents both elderly visiting your area. In the letter you must give:
1) Places that they can see.
2) recommend a place to stay
3) invite them to do something with you
Hello Igor,
I am ecstatic to know that your parents are finally visiting Zurich. I have known them my entire life and I know that it was their dream destination. I am happy to give my advice for their wonderful and comfortable stay in my city.
First of all, there are a lot of tourist attractions here and since we are centrally located all the tourist spots are in proximity compared to other countries. As such, I would recommend them taking a day trip to Mount Titlis and Lucerne. Those are a must do, when here.
Secondly, I would prefer them to stay in Old Town Zurich, just next to the Church. Even though it is a little expensive, but it is centrally located which means they can walk to most of the places.
Lastly, I would really love to host them for dinner at our new restaurant which is just 5 minutes’ walk from Old Town Zurich. It has been a decade since I last saw them. I cannot wait to see them.
Let me know if there’s anything else you want to know.
Best regards,
Brad Jason
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 12, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
Hello Igor, I am ecstatic to know that your parents ...
^^^^^^^
Line 5, column 151, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...ow that it was their dream destination. I am happy to give my advice for their wo...
^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, if, lastly, really, second, secondly, so, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 7.48453608247 134% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 4.92783505155 122% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 5.05154639175 99% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.03092783505 165% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 1.0 3.85567010309 26% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 851.0 937.175257732 91% => OK
No of words: 189.0 206.0 92% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50264550265 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.70779275107 3.78020617076 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.43585149916 2.54303337028 96% => OK
Unique words: 125.0 127.690721649 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.661375661376 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 253.8 290.88556701 87% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.3 1.41237113402 92% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 1.83505154639 163% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 39.2183992564 44.8134815571 88% => OK
Chars per sentence: 65.4615384615 76.5299724578 86% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.5384615385 16.8248392259 86% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.76923076923 4.34317383033 133% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 2.54639175258 79% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 7.41237113402 108% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.94845360825 127% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.176580462166 0.216113520407 82% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0557883040215 0.0766984524023 73% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0347510453679 0.0603063233224 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0820812138102 0.12726935374 64% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.033891587162 0.0580467560999 58% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.0 8.37731958763 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 82.65 70.7449484536 117% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 5.2 7.45979381443 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.23 8.71597938144 94% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.17 7.59969072165 94% => OK
difficult_words: 34.0 41.2886597938 82% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 8.62886597938 75% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 64.606741573 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.75 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.