Your friend is coming to stay in your neighborhood. He has asked some information about the school.
- Describe the school
- Give your opinion
- Why his/her children would like it
Dear Arpita,
Thanks for writing to me. I am really excited to get the news that you have decided to stay in our neighborhood. I'm sure you will like the ambience and infrastructure present in this society. As you had mentioned in the previous letter, you'll want information of children's education, I did some research and I found out one an institution to quality as per your need.
The school name's chubby Cheeks which is located in the next block and the faculty members are very caring and helpful and they are well-trained and can speaking fluent English and Hindi so they will be able to understand your 1-year-old baby girl properly. they enrol only children from 45 days to 5 years old and their recreation hall have all sorts of amenities. they have separate playhouses for different age groups and each playhouse is properly equipped with toys for the development of the toddlers.
I like this institution and my girl is also studying and I am sure you will also, like the well equipments school. they will be installing computer based technology and am sure your toddler will love this.Let me know when you will be coming with all the flight details.
Looking forward to hear from you,
Yours truely,
Rajani
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, really, so, well
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 8.0 7.48453608247 107% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 4.92783505155 162% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 5.05154639175 238% => Less conjunction wanted
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 32.9175257732 88% => OK
Preposition: 22.0 26.3917525773 83% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.85567010309 182% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1031.0 937.175257732 110% => OK
No of words: 212.0 206.0 103% => OK
Chars per words: 4.86320754717 4.54256449028 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.81578560438 3.78020617076 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.61218135971 2.54303337028 103% => OK
Unique words: 140.0 127.690721649 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.660377358491 0.622605031667 106% => OK
syllable_count: 299.7 290.88556701 103% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.13402061856 77% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 10.0 12.6804123711 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 21.0 16.3608247423 128% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 59.5906032861 44.8134815571 133% => OK
Chars per sentence: 103.1 76.5299724578 135% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2 16.8248392259 126% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.2 4.34317383033 74% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 2.54639175258 393% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.94845360825 76% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.163114855888 0.216113520407 75% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0601650929531 0.0766984524023 78% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0438305544879 0.0603063233224 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758956717558 0.12726935374 60% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0497907511766 0.0580467560999 86% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 8.37731958763 144% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 70.7449484536 95% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 7.45979381443 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.91 8.71597938144 125% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.25 7.59969072165 109% => OK
difficult_words: 48.0 41.2886597938 116% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 8.54432989691 122% => OK
text_standard: 11.0 8.15463917526 135% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 89.8876404494 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 8.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.