In some countries the number of shootings increase because many people have guns at home to what extend do you agree or disagree
One of the most conspicuous trends of today’s world is colossal upsurge in number of people believing that shooting increases because many people have guns at home there is a widespread worry that this will lead to a myriads of concerns in one’s however I do not entirely accept this and I wll explain why in this essay.
There are number of arguments in favor of my stance .The most preponderant one is that guns at home cannot only contribute to protecting home from thieves but also lead numerous other benefits in various fields thanks to the wide range of advantages it offers not only can one benefit more when it comes to being effective but they can also enhance the productivity and quality of their lives with much ease efficacy and convenience. Needless to say all these merits stand one in good stead. as far As the augmenting the chances of prosperity and excellence is concerned.
Another pivotal aspects of the aforementioned proposition is that it is only likely to help one thrive and excel in varied areas besides only when such follow system can they broaden their horizons learning such essential attributes as responsibility dedication and perseverance hence it is apparent why many are in the favor of aforementioned topic .
One can conclude that the benefits of guns are indeed too great to ignore.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, besides, but, hence, however, so
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 10.5418719212 104% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 6.10837438424 98% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 8.36945812808 96% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 5.94088669951 118% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 20.9802955665 95% => OK
Preposition: 32.0 31.9359605911 100% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 5.75862068966 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1115.0 1207.87684729 92% => OK
No of words: 226.0 242.827586207 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.93362831858 5.00649968141 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87727950738 3.92707691288 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.81240877427 2.71678728327 104% => OK
Unique words: 137.0 139.433497537 98% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.606194690265 0.580463131201 104% => OK
syllable_count: 365.4 379.143842365 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.57093596059 102% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 4.6157635468 0% => OK
Article: 1.0 1.56157635468 64% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.71428571429 58% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.931034482759 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 3.65517241379 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 6.0 12.6551724138 47% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 37.0 20.5024630542 180% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 154.194051622 50.4703680194 306% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 185.833333333 104.977214359 177% => OK
Words per sentence: 37.6666666667 20.9669160288 180% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.33333333333 7.25397266985 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.12807881773 97% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 5.33497536946 112% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 6.9802955665 72% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 2.75862068966 36% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 2.91625615764 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.168995325874 0.242375264174 70% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0659371199433 0.0925447433944 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0890610206524 0.071462118173 125% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0963693740375 0.151781067708 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0935370106245 0.0609392437508 153% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 20.6 12.6369458128 163% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 33.92 53.1260098522 64% => OK
smog_index: 11.2 6.54236453202 171% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 17.7 10.9458128079 162% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.91 11.5310837438 103% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.59 8.32886699507 115% => OK
difficult_words: 59.0 55.0591133005 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 27.0 9.94827586207 271% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 16.8 10.3980295567 162% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 10.5123152709 114% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 77.7777777778 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 70.0 Out of 90
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.