A friend is expecting you to stay with him in two weeks time, but unfortunately you forgot that you have a business trip at the same time.
Write letter to friend
-apologise and say that you cannot come to visit
-explain why you will not able to visit
-suggest another time that you could visit
Dear Amit,
I hope you're doing well out there! we'd made a plan to visit your place two weeks later. I'm truly sorry that I won't be able to see you due to a business trip at the same time. when discussing our plan I forgot the dates and I feel terrible to tell you about the news.
Do you remember about the Swift Dev conference I was talking about when we last spoke? I'm going to attend it and you know I'm eager to see developers from around the world who'd be lecturing at the conference. That's the main reason I won't be able to come.
But you know I'll be free next month-end, also I assure you there won't be any work around the clock. I'd have a straight 5 days block leave from our office. I can fly to your place then. also, we could plan a nice vacation if it won't be a hassle for you.
Hope to see you soon!
Your friend,
Mohseen
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| 2019-10-13 | b.past | 73 | view |
| 2019-09-02 | mohseenshaikh | 73 | view |
| 2019-08-08 | bhatvishal@ | 73 | view |
| 2019-07-31 | amitsadhana | 73 | view |
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 8, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: you're
Dear Amit, I hope youre doing well out there! wed made a plan t...
^^^^^
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Wed
... I hope youre doing well out there! wed made a plan to visit your place two wee...
^^^
Line 5, column 36, Rule ID: WED_WE_D[1]
Message: Did you mean 'we'd'?
Suggestion: we'd
... I hope youre doing well out there! wed made a plan to visit your place two wee...
^^^
Line 5, column 89, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...an to visit your place two weeks later. Im truly sorry that I wont be able to see ...
^^
Line 5, column 176, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: When
...ue to a business trip at the same time. when discussing our plan I forgot the dates ...
^^^^
Line 9, column 88, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...I was talking about when we last spoke? Im going to attend it and you know Im eage...
^^
Line 9, column 123, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'm
...oke? Im going to attend it and you know Im eager to see developers from around the...
^^
Line 9, column 172, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: who'd
...to see developers from around the world whod be lecturing at the conference. Thats t...
^^^^
Line 9, column 209, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: That's
...ld whod be lecturing at the conference. Thats the main reason I wont be able to come....
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Line 13, column 14, Rule ID: ILL_I_LL[1]
Message: Did you mean 'I'll'?
Suggestion: I'll
...wont be able to come. But you know Ill be free next month-end, also I assure y...
^^^
Line 13, column 101, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: I'd
...here wont be any work around the clock. Id have a straight 5 days block leave from...
^^
Line 13, column 104, Rule ID: MASS_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using third-person verb forms for singular and mass nouns: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e wont be any work around the clock. Id have a straight 5 days block leave from our ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 104, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[8]
Message: The proper name in singular (Id) must be used with a third-person verb: 'has'.
Suggestion: has
...e wont be any work around the clock. Id have a straight 5 days block leave from our ...
^^^^
Line 13, column 186, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: Also
...r office. I can fly to your place then. also, we could plan a nice vacation if it wo...
^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, then, well, i feel, talking about, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 7.48453608247 94% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 4.92783505155 41% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 5.05154639175 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 3.0 3.03092783505 99% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 19.0 26.3917525773 72% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 693.0 937.175257732 74% => OK
No of words: 168.0 206.0 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.125 4.54256449028 91% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.60020574368 3.78020617076 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.00169995781 2.54303337028 79% => OK
Unique words: 106.0 127.690721649 83% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.630952380952 0.622605031667 101% => OK
syllable_count: 207.9 290.88556701 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.2 1.41237113402 85% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 9.13402061856 44% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.463917525773 216% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 12.6804123711 87% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 16.3608247423 92% => OK
Sentence length SD: 27.1000594675 44.8134815571 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.0 76.5299724578 82% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.2727272727 16.8248392259 91% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.63636363636 4.34317383033 130% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 14.0 2.54639175258 550% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.304505983042 0.216113520407 141% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.112674712639 0.0766984524023 147% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0789800700647 0.0603063233224 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.1949909458 0.12726935374 153% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0514464474971 0.0580467560999 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 5.7 8.37731958763 68% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 90.09 70.7449484536 127% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 4.4 7.45979381443 59% => Flesch kincaid grade is low.
coleman_liau_index: 6.08 8.71597938144 70% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 5.88 7.59969072165 77% => OK
difficult_words: 16.0 41.2886597938 39% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 8.62886597938 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 8.54432989691 94% => OK
text_standard: 6.0 8.15463917526 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.