Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.
Do you agree or disagree?
Today's tv constantly shows news report about teenagers' crime. Because of that, adults become highly worry. So, as a result, they frustratingly searching for reasonable answers.
In my opinion, there are factors that lead to an uneducated child, who is potentially going to be a criminal. two most outstanding reasons, come from each own home.
Looking to a child, first thing to notice is how he or she has been grown. parenting must be done probably in order to raise the child into a well-behavior person. parents should teach their children about love, but not hurting or harming people around them. Beside that, control source of information children may reach would hopefully decrease unsuitable thought in their cognitive mind.
Other cause that affects to the teenagers is, society. harmful people are everywhere and they know clearly how to state their thought sound auspiciously incredible. For teenager, it is true that this is the age of rebellion. they want to experience risky, challenging tasks. they are also too innocent t detect dangerous criminal. therefore, there should be more security to the society to lower the rate that a teenager could be in touch with unfriendly people.
Among teenagers, crime increase like an enormous rage which become a tough task to stop it. However, there are solutions for adults to reverse the rage in time. parenting must be paid mor attention, which mean parents should spend more time with their children, listen to them and share their ideal. society could organize some activities or establish fares, which aim to bring people together, restrict crime to be in society.
In conclusion, creating a positive environment for children to rise is the most crucial factor to have auspicious civilians. To have that, parenting and society are two components can't be forgot. In addition, if a teenager has a mistake for being any kind of criminal, punishment must be done base on the law, in order to let them understand and never do it again.
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- Some people think that the most important thing about being rich is it gives a person the opportunity to help other people.Do you agree or disagree? 84
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, look, may, so, therefore, well, in addition, in conclusion, kind of, as a result, in my opinion, it is true
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 21.0 13.1623246493 160% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 44.0 41.998997996 105% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1688.0 1615.20841683 105% => OK
No of words: 330.0 315.596192385 105% => OK
Chars per words: 5.11515151515 5.12529762239 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.26214759535 4.20363070211 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.67751923888 2.80592935109 95% => OK
Unique words: 209.0 176.041082164 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633333333333 0.561755894193 113% => OK
syllable_count: 513.0 506.74238477 101% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 5.43587174349 74% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 16.0721442886 137% => OK
Sentence length: 15.0 20.2975951904 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.3280238747 49.4020404114 69% => OK
Chars per sentence: 76.7272727273 106.682146367 72% => OK
Words per sentence: 15.0 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.27272727273 7.06120827912 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.38176352705 137% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 13.0 5.01903807615 259% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 10.0 3.9879759519 251% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.137781062617 0.244688304435 56% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0339197872626 0.084324248473 40% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.031608874923 0.0667982634062 47% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0642450185961 0.151304729494 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.021937170166 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 56.25 50.2224549098 112% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.82 12.4159519038 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.4 8.58950901804 98% => OK
difficult_words: 84.0 78.4519038076 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 9.78957915832 61% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.0 10.1190380762 79% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum five paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 84.2696629213 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.5 Out of 9
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