You have heard about plans to build new apartments in a public park near your home.
You want to give your opinion about this.
Write a letter to the editor of your local newspaper. In your letter
Explain how you learnt about these plans
Say what you think of the park
Give your opinion on the plans
Dear Sir or Madam,
I hope this finds you well, Sine one of my friend who is teaching some French to mayor indicated me, there seems some plans for the public park next to where we occupied, it is going to been destroyed and instead of this vast park will been built new apartments. I am really astonished about what I heard.
Let me explain you in details, first of all, while many vicinities are complaining about the noises come out from the park, I think one of the city’s bits is these noises which means city’s children are playing there and they are tend to enjoy safe and healthy entertainment and it’s quietly fascinating.
Furthermore, in a research which I have found in local library of town relieved the ages park trees are more than 100 years, it’s obviously relevant these are our investment from a century ago which support our town has an ancient history in it.
So, even though our city needs new structure for their apartments I thinks it’s unfair to cut down trees and this green land to own a place for putting that landmarks. I am considering if it’s possible establish an article about this catastrophic event and announce the local people to counteract with this matter.
Your assistance in this matter is greatly appreciate.
With faithfully,
Chi Chung
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 233, Rule ID: PRP_PAST_PART[4]
Message: Did you mean 'will be' or 'has been'?
Suggestion: will be; has been
...destroyed and instead of this vast park will been built new apartments. I am really aston...
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Line 9, column 241, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'tended'.
Suggestion: tended
...children are playing there and they are tend to enjoy safe and healthy entertainment...
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Line 17, column 69, Rule ID: NON3PRS_VERB[1]
Message: The pronoun 'I' must be used with a non-third-person form of a verb: 'think'
Suggestion: think
...ds new structure for their apartments I thinks it's unfair to cut down trees and ...
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Line 21, column 43, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'appreciated'.
Suggestion: appreciated
...ur assistance in this matter is greatly appreciate. With faithfully, Chi Chung
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, furthermore, if, may, really, so, well, while, i think, first of all
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 7.48453608247 147% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 5.05154639175 139% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 33.0 32.9175257732 100% => OK
Preposition: 27.0 26.3917525773 102% => OK
Nominalization: 3.0 3.85567010309 78% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1119.0 937.175257732 119% => OK
No of words: 225.0 206.0 109% => OK
Chars per words: 4.97333333333 4.54256449028 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.87298334621 3.78020617076 102% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.64974631909 2.54303337028 104% => OK
Unique words: 152.0 127.690721649 119% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.675555555556 0.622605031667 109% => OK
syllable_count: 323.1 290.88556701 111% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 9.13402061856 66% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.83505154639 109% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 1.44329896907 139% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 8.0 12.6804123711 63% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 28.0 16.3608247423 171% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 107.046061931 44.8134815571 239% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 139.875 76.5299724578 183% => OK
Words per sentence: 28.125 16.8248392259 167% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.375 4.34317383033 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 2.54639175258 157% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.94845360825 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.219191794184 0.216113520407 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0874016134107 0.0766984524023 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0497697219976 0.0603063233224 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.11128848872 0.12726935374 87% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0445774876325 0.0580467560999 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 8.37731958763 191% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.98 70.7449484536 85% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.8 7.45979381443 158% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.84 8.71597938144 136% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.97 7.59969072165 105% => OK
difficult_words: 42.0 41.2886597938 102% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 18.0 8.62886597938 209% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 13.2 8.54432989691 154% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 8.15463917526 147% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.