shopping is good or bad
Every day, when you go home after work, you can easy to see so many shops on the street. Most of them are crowded and you have a question “what is the reasons when somebody go shopping?”.
First reason, you go to shopping because you want to buy something. You need a new shirt you will go clothes shop. You need some food you will go to super market.
However, sometimes you go shopping but you do not buy any things or you buy something which you don’t really want or you go to shopping in free time because it is your hobby. As you, today, many people go shopping in their free time and Shopping has replaced many other activities.
As you know, when you buy some new thing you will feel relax and happy and like you, anybody feel happy, too when they buy some things. As a recent research , when you shopping, your brain make endorphin and dopamine. Endorphin and dopamine are drugs or stimulants and you will want to shopping more and more. And we have “shopaholic” to talk about somebody addicted to shopping. If you are shopaholic person you will can’t stop shopping and unable control the buying of something. Sometime, you buy something that is really unnecessary or you had too much. So you will have so many financial problems and usually debt.
Final, shopping is necessary for your life but you must control when you buy something and don’t have to become shopaholic person.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 179, Rule ID: HE_VERB_AGR[1]
Message: The pronoun 'somebody' must be used with a third-person verb: 'goes'.
Suggestion: goes
...'what is the reasons when somebody go shopping?'. First reason, you...
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Line 1, column 199, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...asons when somebody go shopping?'. First reason, you go to shopping because...
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Line 7, column 137, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
...l happy, too when they buy some things. As a recent research , when you shopping, ...
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Line 7, column 157, Rule ID: COMMA_PARENTHESIS_WHITESPACE
Message: Put a space after the comma, but not before the comma
Suggestion: ,
...ey buy some things. As a recent research , when you shopping, your brain make endo...
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Line 7, column 563, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...ng that is really unnecessary or you had too much. So you will have so many finan...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, first, however, if, really, so, you know
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 11.0 7.85571142285 140% => OK
Conjunction : 18.0 10.4138276553 173% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 37.0 24.0651302605 154% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 17.0 41.998997996 40% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 1.0 8.3376753507 12% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1182.0 1615.20841683 73% => OK
No of words: 251.0 315.596192385 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.70916334661 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.98032404683 4.20363070211 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68792019338 2.80592935109 96% => OK
Unique words: 130.0 176.041082164 74% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.517928286853 0.561755894193 92% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 361.8 506.74238477 71% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 7.0 2.10420841683 333% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 4.76152304609 21% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 34.7978287956 49.4020404114 70% => OK
Chars per sentence: 78.8 106.682146367 74% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.7333333333 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.0 7.06120827912 42% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0966983400017 0.244688304435 40% => The similarity between the topic and the content is low.
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0565805815229 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0499997013164 0.0667982634062 75% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0845383215693 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0315952033598 0.056905535591 56% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 13.0946893788 69% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 72.16 50.2224549098 144% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.2 11.3001002004 64% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.74 12.4159519038 78% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.95 8.58950901804 81% => OK
difficult_words: 40.0 78.4519038076 51% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.33 Out of 6
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