The prevention of health problem and illness is morr importent than the treatment and medicine. Government funding should reflect this to what extent do you agree.
All the money in the world can't buy you back good health. Now a days, people are believing old proverb concepts like prevention is better than cure. They assume that, than giving importance to treatment and medicine, comparatively spending money on preventing health problems and illness gives good results. Government should encourage people to take preventative measures. I agree with the given statment that , the prevention of health problems and illness is more important than the treatment and medicine. Government founding should reflect this. Takeing preventionary steps gives grate results in society.
Now a days, people are neglecting proper food diet and physical fitness due to their hectic schedule so majority of people are affecting towards health problems because lack of taking prevention steps. Moreover, by tacking safety steps, leads to decrease the effect of health problems. day by day, people are adducting to smocking and alcohol which are bad indicators to health in this scenario taking prevention steps like joining them in rehabilitation centre or using some good medicine to stop smoking and consuming alcohol gives a great results and not to face terrible health problems. For instance, in recent new survey says 20% of Indian people are facing health problems because of not taking proper prevention measures. They are a lot of factores that effects in this situation.
Government can play a key and affective role in this particular scenario. Authority can change society's by taking proper new steps, rules and regulations like educating people on prevention steps and spending money on advertisement about preventions which gives a splendid impact on people's mind set. One clear example , Germany government took profound steps in prevention measures on health problems shows tremendous result.
In my perspective, tacking new preventionary steps leads to decrease health problems in society and government steps shows good results on people.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
moreover, so, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 13.0 10.4138276553 125% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 14.0 24.0651302605 58% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 20.0 8.3376753507 240% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1679.0 1615.20841683 104% => OK
No of words: 305.0 315.596192385 97% => OK
Chars per words: 5.50491803279 5.12529762239 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.17902490978 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77097820171 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 170.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.55737704918 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 497.7 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 1.0 2.52805611222 40% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.2975951904 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 70.7229409386 49.4020404114 143% => OK
Chars per sentence: 104.9375 106.682146367 98% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0625 20.7667163134 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 1.625 7.06120827912 23% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 5.01903807615 199% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.299186865833 0.244688304435 122% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117745493453 0.084324248473 140% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0939458859134 0.0667982634062 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.187319306109 0.151304729494 124% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.126411290886 0.056905535591 222% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.0 13.0946893788 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 52.19 50.2224549098 104% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 14.62 12.4159519038 118% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.62 8.58950901804 100% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 9.78957915832 56% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.1190380762 95% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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