Some people think that government should spend money for faster public transportation.others think money should be spend on different aspects such as cost reduction and environmental conservation.
Discuss both views and give your opinion
The faster public transportation is essential for every country so that it is believed by some people that government should spend more money on faster public transportation,however,some argued that authorities should focus on other factors such as cost reduction and environmental conservation.in this essay, i will discuss both views before giving my opinion.
To begin with,public transportation generates high revenge for country.to make it specific,more and more people will use public transportation if they get best service and often bus and train arrivals so that it will automatically increase the profit of country and it will boost country's economy.secondly,faster public transportation will encourage people to avoid their personal vehicle and travel in public transportation as it provides faster services.also,it would lead less consumption of fuel as there are already have assumptions that World could suffer from scarcity of fuel.last but not least,public transportation would help people to reach their destination on time as most of the people generally engaged with their study and work. For instance, in japan, majority of the people use bullet train to travel due to its faster service.
On the other hand,government should also be concerned about environmental conservation.nowadays,the environmental issues have been increased dramatically,for instance air pollution,water pollution, noise pollution and so on so that firstly,government should focus on eco-friendly public transportation to cut environmental damage. Secondly,due to toxic environment,human would face the problem of extinction and no cost is too high to prevent such catastrophe.lastly,authorities should more focus on purification of air and water so that the health issues can reduce.apart from that, the cost of public transportation would be cheap so that even middle class people can afford and more and more people attract to use public transportation.
In my opinion,government should pay heed on other factors such as environmental prevention and cost reduction because to use public transportation,the existence of human is also required.
In conclusion,it is irrefutable fact that, faster public transportation is must because it boost economy,encourage people to use public transportation and it shows the image of the country to other countries but along with that government should not overlook the conservation of environment as health issues have been increased.
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Attribute Value Ideal
Final score: 6.0 out of 9
Category: Good Excellent
No. of Grammatical Errors: 0 2
No. of Spelling Errors: 0 2
No. of Sentences: 8 15
No. of Words: 380 350
No. of Characters: 2073 1500
No. of Different Words: 176 200
Fourth Root of Number of Words: 4.415 4.7
Average Word Length: 5.455 4.6
Word Length SD: 3.351 2.4
No. of Words greater than 5 chars: 149 100
No. of Words greater than 6 chars: 98 80
No. of Words greater than 7 chars: 76 40
No. of Words greater than 8 chars: 63 20
Use of Passive Voice (%): 0 0
Avg. Sentence Length: 47.5 21.0
Sentence Length SD: 17.578 7.5
Use of Discourse Markers (%): 1 0.12
Sentence-Text Coherence: 0.512 0.35
Sentence-Para Coherence: 0.803 0.50
Sentence-Sentence Coherence: 0.168 0.07
Number of Paragraphs: 5 5
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, however, if, lastly, look, second, secondly, so, apart from, for instance, in conclusion, such as, in my opinion, to begin with, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 20.0 7.85571142285 255% => Less auxiliary verb wanted.
Conjunction : 16.0 10.4138276553 154% => OK
Relative clauses : 11.0 7.30460921844 151% => OK
Pronoun: 29.0 24.0651302605 121% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 45.0 41.998997996 107% => OK
Nominalization: 36.0 8.3376753507 432% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2128.0 1615.20841683 132% => OK
No of words: 361.0 315.596192385 114% => OK
Chars per words: 5.89473684211 5.12529762239 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.35889894354 4.20363070211 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 4.20570506885 2.80592935109 150% => OK
Unique words: 182.0 176.041082164 103% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.504155124654 0.561755894193 90% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 644.4 506.74238477 127% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.8 1.60771543086 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 16.0721442886 44% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 51.0 20.2975951904 251% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 188.443896268 49.4020404114 381% => The lengths of sentences changed so frequently.
Chars per sentence: 304.0 106.682146367 285% => Less chars_per_sentence wanted.
Words per sentence: 51.5714285714 20.7667163134 248% => Less words per sentence wanted.
Discourse Markers: 24.7142857143 7.06120827912 350% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 24.0 5.01903807615 478% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 8.67935871743 23% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.312713375028 0.244688304435 128% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.177168388867 0.084324248473 210% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.132114549984 0.0667982634062 198% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.214012827536 0.151304729494 141% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.141769215219 0.056905535591 249% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 32.1 13.0946893788 245% => Automated_readability_index is high.
flesch_reading_ease: 2.79 50.2224549098 6% => Flesch_reading_ease is low.
smog_index: 17.1 7.44779559118 230% => Smog_index is high.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 25.5 11.3001002004 226% => Flesch kincaid grade is high.
coleman_liau_index: 17.77 12.4159519038 143% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.88 8.58950901804 115% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 31.5 9.78957915832 322% => Linsear_write_formula is high.
gunning_fog: 22.4 10.1190380762 221% => Gunning_fog is high.
text_standard: 18.0 10.7795591182 167% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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