People should insist on a challenging plan rather than a practical plan.
Systematic plans can bring us an organized life and success. however, people may wonder which plan is better: one with more challenges or more practical. As for me, I think a challenging plan is better.
First, a challenging plan can propel our society to move forward. The invention of the airplane serves as a good example. Flying in the sky like birds has always been a human dream. [people had been dreaming of flying
In the sky like a bird for thousands of years.]. however, due to the limit of techniques and materials, most of the people just enjoyed this plan as a dream which will never come true. On the contrary, Wright brothers insisted on their plan and never gave up despite other's incomprehension and mockery. Finally, they succeeded! Their great invention brings people up to the sky and changes transportation completely. Things like the computer, the internet, and submarine change the world dramatically and make our society advanced. And these are just drops in the bucket, society progresses as these plans come true.
Secondly, the plan with challenging can nurture one's perseverance. The stories of famous scientists can prove my idea. when Edison made a plan to innovate the electric lamp, it seems a ridiculous joke to his peers. thousands of experiments were done in order to realize his dream. With repeated failures, his wife and friends persuaded him to quit this idea. however, he managed to conquer all the difficulties and eventually succeeded. when Nobel sought an appropriate formula for the safe dynamite, he suffered the same dilemma with Edison. What's worse, His younger brother was killed during one experiment and the government once even proscribed him from research. Facing all these obstacles, he did everything but giving up. In end, those remarkable achievements win him respect from all over the world. challenging plans make these people strong enough to treat every defeat as a necessary step towards success.
Finally, the challenging plan may bring happy accidents. thinking about the invention of gunpowder. In ancient China, many people had an unrealistic dream of immortal. they believe that there is a sort of magic pills can help them live forever. In their pursuit of immortal, An unexpected ingredient was made and gunpowder was founded. this unexpected discovery was one of the most important inventions in human history.
To sum up, the challenging plan can propel society to move forward, reveal people the value of perseverance, and bring happy accidents.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, first, however, if, may, second, secondly, so, as for, i think, sort of, on the contrary, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 15.1003584229 73% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 9.8082437276 92% => OK
Conjunction : 15.0 13.8261648746 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 11.0286738351 45% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 32.0 43.0788530466 74% => OK
Preposition: 51.0 52.1666666667 98% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.0752688172 99% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2140.0 1977.66487455 108% => OK
No of words: 411.0 407.700716846 101% => OK
Chars per words: 5.20681265207 4.8611393121 107% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.50256981431 4.48103885553 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78632897413 2.67179642975 104% => OK
Unique words: 233.0 212.727598566 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.566909975669 0.524837075471 108% => OK
syllable_count: 645.3 618.680645161 104% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.51630824373 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.59856630824 125% => OK
Article: 8.0 3.08781362007 259% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.86738351254 161% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.94265232975 142% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 30.0 20.6003584229 146% => OK
Sentence length: 13.0 20.1344086022 65% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 25.764833915 48.9658058833 53% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 71.3333333333 100.406767564 71% => OK
Words per sentence: 13.7 20.6045352989 66% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76666666667 5.45110844103 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 6.0 4.53405017921 132% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 25.0 11.8709677419 211% => Less positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 3.85842293907 78% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.88709677419 41% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.26996261747 0.236089414692 114% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0716025782072 0.076458572812 94% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.08379646183 0.0737576698707 114% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.161921538576 0.150856017488 107% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612067091976 0.0645574589148 95% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.0 11.7677419355 85% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 58.28 58.1214874552 100% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.10430107527 51% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.4 10.1575268817 83% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 10.9000537634 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.05 8.01818996416 100% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 86.8835125448 113% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 10.002688172 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.2 10.0537634409 72% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.247311828 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 21.0 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.