The best way for a society to prepare its young people for leadership in the government, industry, or other fields is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation, not competition.
Development of society is depends on one who rules it. Leader has the capacity to change anything in that society. The arguement "The best way to prelare young people for leadership is by instilling in them a sense of cooperation instead of competition" is true.
For instance, during world war 2 , in India, society has choosen leaders like Mahatma Gandhi, Subash Chandra Bose, and some others. We have heard from our history that above mentioned leaders had served the nation without expecting anything from it and with cooperation with people. If a leader is cooperative, then he or she is ready to listen to people concerns or ideas about the development of society, whereas if the leader thinks that he is in a competition, then society will not be developed, instead leader will be improved in all means.
The people in the leader position should not think about profits to him. He has to think about in what way he can bring profit to the society. For example, consider teacher in the school. If a teacher thinks that there is a competition amongst other teachers in that school, then he or she thinks about how I have to be in the topmost position. But if the teachers are doing their job in the effective way by interacting with students with love and affection, automatically they will be the best teacher amongst all.
In a society, the normal people doesnot have the power the leader has. So leader can do anything with his powers. Once he starts interacting with the people in the society, he will come to know about their problems. In this way he can build and strong society. Hence, leadership qualities are love, affection, an many more except competition.
Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: ,
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...adership qualities are love, affection, an many more except competition.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, hence, if, so, still, then, whereas, as to, for example, for instance
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 19.5258426966 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 8.0 12.4196629213 64% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 14.8657303371 54% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 6.0 11.3162921348 53% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 27.0 33.0505617978 82% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 13.0 12.9106741573 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1397.0 2235.4752809 62% => OK
No of words: 291.0 442.535393258 66% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.80068728522 5.05705443957 95% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.13022058845 4.55969084622 91% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70226096059 2.79657885939 97% => OK
Unique words: 154.0 215.323595506 72% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.529209621993 0.4932671777 107% => OK
syllable_count: 432.0 704.065955056 61% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 6.24550561798 48% => OK
Article: 5.0 4.99550561798 100% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 3.10617977528 64% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 1.77640449438 113% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.38483146067 91% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 20.2370786517 79% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 18.0 23.0359550562 78% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 60.0208297177 60.3974514979 99% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3125 118.986275619 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.1875 23.4991977007 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.625 5.21951772744 89% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 7.80617977528 26% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 10.2758426966 58% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 5.13820224719 58% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 4.83258426966 145% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.179909994169 0.243740707755 74% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0629475955913 0.0831039109588 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0760668253279 0.0758088955206 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.13532740861 0.150359130593 90% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.10321260934 0.0667264976115 155% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.3 14.1392134831 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 61.67 48.8420337079 126% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 12.1743820225 75% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.56 12.1639044944 87% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.68 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 58.0 100.480337079 58% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.8971910112 71% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 11.2143820225 82% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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