College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs.
The statement given have two different views. The first one is based on own interest and other is based on the current trend and it's more practical. I am agree with the second statement, it doesn't mean that the first one is totally invalid. Passion would always help but there's also a need of being pragmatic and developing skills in demand in order to get a job. One should always follow their passion, but it should be practical as well.
College is an opportunity to learn and develop the skills. There are many subjects, which college offers to students, It now depends on students to chose subjects which are in trend. There are many fields to chose from in college. In engineering field only, there are mechanical, automobile, computer and many other branches to chose from. If a student is having interest in computer engineering, then he should chose computer engineering as their core branch, because it's his passion, which motivates them to participate and learn skills needed. Computer science only have many subjects to choose from like operating systems, networking, hacking, software development, etc. Now, it's student's responsibility to learn the subjets whose jobs are in demand, this is a practical choice.
To gain any jobs, it requires certain level of skills. It fulfills the company's requirnments.It's important to note that having a passion in job is also as important as learning new skills. Jobs are created to fit appropriate position, and passion in learning right field would ensure the jobs those are in demand.
In India, there is a big problem of unemployment, despite having maximum number of engineers passing out every year. Many of the students don't realize what their real passion is, they just went after craze of being an engineer and end up having no skills at all. Which makes them underqualified for the jobs. Identifying Passion is important in chosing right field, while being practical and chosing right skills to develop surely makes a person qualified for the jobs.
In conclusion, passion certainly helps, but it should always be used in a practical way, by keeping the demand in mind.
- Governments should not fund any scientific research whose consequences are unclear. 50
- College students should be encouraged to pursue subjects that interest them rather than the courses that seem most likely to lead to jobs. 50
- People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.It's always important to justify the taken decision. It can help people analyze and evaluate the consequences of the taken decision.
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 155, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[1]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'agreed'.
Suggestion: agreed
...rent trend and its more practical. I am agree with the second statement, it doesnt me...
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Line 1, column 191, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: doesn't
... am agree with the second statement, it doesnt mean that the first one is totally inva...
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Line 1, column 272, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: there's
... invalid. Passion would always help but theres also a need of being pragmatic and deve...
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Line 5, column 470, Rule ID: IT_IS[17]
Message: Did you mean 'it's' (='it is') instead of 'its' (possessive pronoun)?
Suggestion: it's; it is
...gineering as their core branch, because its his passion, which motivates them to pa...
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Line 5, column 784, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... in demand, this is a practical choice. To gain any jobs, it requires certain le...
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Line 9, column 94, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: Its
.... It fulfills the companys requirnments.Its important to note that having a passion...
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Line 9, column 260, Rule ID: AFFORD_VB[1]
Message: This verb is used with the infinitive: 'to right'
Suggestion: to right
...riate position, and passion in learning right field would ensure the jobs those are i...
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Line 13, column 140, Rule ID: EN_CONTRACTION_SPELLING
Message: Possible spelling mistake found
Suggestion: don't
...g out every year. Many of the students dont realize what their real passion is, the...
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Line 17, column 70, Rule ID: IN_A_X_MANNER[1]
Message: Consider replacing "in a practical way" with adverb for "practical"; eg, "in a hasty manner" with "hastily".
...nly helps, but it should always be used in a practical way, by keeping the demand in mind.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, if, second, so, then, well, while, in conclusion
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 22.0 19.5258426966 113% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 7.0 12.4196629213 56% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 14.8657303371 81% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 11.3162921348 62% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 23.0 33.0505617978 70% => OK
Preposition: 48.0 58.6224719101 82% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 12.9106741573 46% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1795.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 356.0 442.535393258 80% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.04213483146 5.05705443957 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.34372677135 4.55969084622 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.68515083998 2.79657885939 96% => OK
Unique words: 193.0 215.323595506 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.542134831461 0.4932671777 110% => OK
syllable_count: 540.9 704.065955056 77% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.59117977528 94% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 6.24550561798 144% => OK
Article: 2.0 4.99550561798 40% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 3.10617977528 97% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.38483146067 137% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 20.0 20.2370786517 99% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 23.0359550562 74% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 41.1549207264 60.3974514979 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 89.75 118.986275619 75% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8 23.4991977007 76% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.3 5.21951772744 63% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.97078651685 101% => OK
Language errors: 9.0 7.80617977528 115% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 13.0 10.2758426966 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 5.13820224719 39% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 4.83258426966 103% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.144021334927 0.243740707755 59% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0447761284656 0.0831039109588 54% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0410775297872 0.0758088955206 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0758565986708 0.150359130593 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0337222034784 0.0667264976115 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.2 14.1392134831 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 48.8420337079 128% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.92365168539 39% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 12.1743820225 71% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.66 12.1639044944 96% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.72 8.38706741573 92% => OK
difficult_words: 73.0 100.480337079 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 6.5 11.8971910112 55% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 8.8 11.2143820225 78% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.7820224719 76% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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