The tables below give information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas on 1999 and 2004 in five European countries.
The table diagrams provide information about sales of Fairtrade-labelled coffee and bananas in five European countries in 1999 and 2004. At a glance, almost all countries sales have increased in those five years for both coffee and bananas.
Looking at the graph closely, coffee, in 1999, had had sales in Switzerland (3 millions of euros) which had doubled after five years. Moreover, a significant change in coffee sales was observed for UK while Denmark and Belgium had minimum increments in 2004. However, Sweden had the lowest sales of coffee in 1999 and 2004, as well as, there was 0.2 million of euros increment in coffee sales.
Moving into the details, in 2004, Denmark had lowest sales of bananas in spite of being second largest banana selling country in 1999. In addition, the sales of bananas in Sweden has also decreased by 0.7 million of euros. However, there was remarkable increase in sales of bananas in Switzerland, UK and Belgium.
In summation, Bananas sales was higher then sales of coffee as a whole in the European countries.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Possible typo: you repeated a word
Suggestion: had
... at the graph closely, coffee, in 1999, had had sales in Switzerland 3 millions of euro...
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Line 5, column 77, Rule ID: CD_DOZENS_OF[1]
Message: Use a singular form of the numeral here: '3 million'.
Suggestion: 3 million
..., in 1999, had had sales in Switzerland 3 millions of euros which had doubled after five year...
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Line 9, column 43, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[2]
Message: A determiner is probably missing here: 'had the lowest'.
Suggestion: had the lowest
...ving into the details, in 2004, Denmark had lowest sales of bananas in spite of being seco...
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Message: Did you mean 'higher than'?
Suggestion: higher than
...m. In summation, Bananas sales was higher then sales of coffee as a whole in the Europ...
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Message: Comparison requires 'than', not 'then' nor 'as'.
Suggestion: than
... In summation, Bananas sales was higher then sales of coffee as a whole in the Europ...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, however, if, look, moreover, second, so, then, well, while, in addition, as well as, in spite of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.0 71% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 6.8 88% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 1.0 5.60731707317 18% => OK
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 887.0 965.302439024 92% => OK
No of words: 176.0 196.424390244 90% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.03977272727 4.92477711251 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.64232057368 3.73543355544 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.66107516292 2.65546596893 100% => OK
Unique words: 94.0 106.607317073 88% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.534090909091 0.547539520022 98% => OK
syllable_count: 262.8 283.868780488 93% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 3.36585365854 149% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 19.3703349621 43.030603864 45% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 98.5555555556 112.824112599 87% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.5555555556 22.9334400587 85% => OK
Discourse Markers: 11.3333333333 5.23603664747 216% => Less transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 1.69756097561 295% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 3.70975609756 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.13902439024 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.427355261913 0.215688989381 198% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.202437435139 0.103423049105 196% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.175635289523 0.0843802449381 208% => The coherence between sentences is low.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.285734728605 0.15604864568 183% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.118990194521 0.0819641961636 145% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.1 13.2329268293 91% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 60.65 61.2550243902 99% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.95 11.4140731707 105% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.44 8.06136585366 105% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 10.5 11.4329268293 92% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 11.0658536585 90% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.