You are going to visit New Zealand for an 'English and Homestay' program. You have just received details of your homestay host family.
Write your first letter to the family. In your letter
introduce yourself
ask the family some questions to get information that is important to you
tell the family about your arrival date and time
Dear Mr and Mrs Gary,
I am Jasmin studying as a postgraduate student in bachelor of commerce . I have opted for an international program to my enhance skills and level. Initially, I got the mail from Home stay organisation at your place for my program. The reasons for my writing is to inform you about the details of journey as well as some questionnaire about the new place.
To elucidate, I will leave on September 27 at 1.30 p.m from my country airport and will reach their on September 29 at 9.00 a.m at New Zealand airport. Moreover,I will send my identification details as well as contact details to you for your general information.
Additionally, I am blissfully happy to join your family and share each others personal experiences while the stay. Whilst, I have dilemma of some questions running in my mind. Will you be able to come to me pick me up ? . If you can't than any details of the local taxi. Is the home stay nearby to my selected program. What is the cost of the local transport ?. Also, is there any library near to the residential place.
Looking forward to your favourable response.
Yours faithfully,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...graduate student in bachelor of commerce . I have opted for an international progr...
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Message: Put a space after the comma
Suggestion: , I
....00 a.m at New Zealand airport. Moreover,I will send my identification details as ...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
... you be able to come to me pick me up ? . If you cant than any details of the loc...
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Line 13, column 223, Rule ID: SENTENCE_FRAGMENT[1]
Message: “If” at the beginning of a sentence requires a 2nd clause. Maybe a comma, question or exclamation mark is missing, or the sentence is incomplete and should be joined with the following sentence.
...ou be able to come to me pick me up ? . If you cant than any details of the local ...
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Line 13, column 230, Rule ID: CANT[1]
Message: Did you mean 'can't' or 'cannot'?
Suggestion: can't; cannot
...ble to come to me pick me up ? . If you cant than any details of the local taxi. Is...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, if, look, moreover, so, well, while, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 4.92783505155 81% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.03092783505 0% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 32.9175257732 79% => OK
Preposition: 28.0 26.3917525773 106% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 949.0 937.175257732 101% => OK
No of words: 199.0 206.0 97% => OK
Chars per words: 4.76884422111 4.54256449028 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.75589349951 3.78020617076 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.83069121154 2.54303337028 111% => OK
Unique words: 124.0 127.690721649 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623115577889 0.622605031667 100% => OK
syllable_count: 286.2 290.88556701 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 9.13402061856 88% => OK
Article: 1.0 0.824742268041 121% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 12.6804123711 110% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 36.5704191329 44.8134815571 82% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.7857142857 76.5299724578 89% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.2142857143 16.8248392259 84% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.78571428571 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.29896907216 116% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 2.54639175258 196% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 5.0 7.41237113402 67% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 1.49484536082 134% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 8.0 3.94845360825 203% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.226637041736 0.216113520407 105% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0788474179997 0.0766984524023 103% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0586284496642 0.0603063233224 97% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.105048751817 0.12726935374 83% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0567688423315 0.0580467560999 98% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 8.1 8.37731958763 97% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.79 8.71597938144 112% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.74 7.59969072165 102% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 41.2886597938 104% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 8.62886597938 127% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 8.15463917526 98% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.