The line graph belows shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050
the provided line graph illustrates how population grow in two different countries over the period of 50 years.
Obviously, the habitats in China predicatively decline, while in India the level of population dramatically increase.
In 2000, the number of Chinese is around 1,25 billions, whereas, in India the population is lower 0,25 billion. At present, the rate of population in China slightly goes up over 1,4 billion. In contrast, India's population continuously rises (1,3 billion).
According to the graph, from 2020 to 2050, the population growth between the two nations have different directions. While the figure of India soars to 1,6 billion, the population in China falls to 1,4 billions after approximate 25 years of rising.
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- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 67
- The line graph belows shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050 56
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 78
- The line graph belows shows population figures for India and China since the year 2000 and predicted population growth up until 2050 56
- The graph below shows the proportion of the population aged 65 and over between 1940 and 2040 in three different countries. 78
Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 1, Rule ID: UPPERCASE_SENTENCE_START
Message: This sentence does not start with an uppercase letter
Suggestion: The
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, whereas, while, in contrast
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.0 29% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 0.0 6.8 0% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 0.0 3.15609756098 0% => OK
Pronoun: 0.0 5.60731707317 0% => OK
Preposition: 26.0 33.7804878049 77% => OK
Nominalization: 7.0 3.97073170732 176% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 628.0 965.302439024 65% => OK
No of words: 116.0 196.424390244 59% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.41379310345 4.92477711251 110% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.28181803491 3.73543355544 88% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9314401342 2.65546596893 110% => OK
Unique words: 72.0 106.607317073 68% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620689655172 0.547539520022 113% => OK
syllable_count: 181.8 283.868780488 64% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.45097560976 110% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 0.0 1.53170731707 0% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 3.36585365854 178% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 7.0 8.94146341463 78% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 16.0 22.4926829268 71% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 22.5379498552 43.030603864 52% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 89.7142857143 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.5714285714 22.9334400587 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.0 5.23603664747 95% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 1.69756097561 59% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 2.0 3.70975609756 54% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.362620178883 0.215688989381 168% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.165708151316 0.103423049105 160% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0227783727522 0.0843802449381 27% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.204385323608 0.15604864568 131% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0595527632065 0.0819641961636 73% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.3 13.2329268293 93% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 61.2550243902 90% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 10.3012195122 92% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.8 11.4140731707 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.79 8.06136585366 109% => OK
difficult_words: 32.0 40.7170731707 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 11.4329268293 66% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.9970731707 76% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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More content wanted.
Minimum 150 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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