People who make decisions based on emotion and justify those decisions with logic afterwards are poor decision makers.
Human being has been always undecided about being emotional or logical in different circumstances of life. Some people believe that deciding based on emotion leads into nothing but regret, while others claim that following your instinct can bring success in one's life. I believe that although emotional decision making does not always bring contrition, but following the logic is the most safe and assured way of living.
In many situations, individuals respond to their surroundings only by their impulse. For example, impulsive buyers choose to buy something without considering the reason for that,therefore they usually regret their choice after a short while.Drug addicts or substance users are also the instance of those succumbing to their will. Also,Some emotional incite can lead to huge failures in one's life. When some investos accept the risk of funding in an uncertain field and finally end up bankrupt are a salient example of living on will rather than on logic. On the other hand, there are very few examples of rational decision makers who confront big debacles in their life, they may not experience notable success or wealth, but it is unlikely that they become desperate as a result of poor reasoning.
Having said that, emotion is not always disadvantageous to the people. We can find many successful people who owe their ideal standings to their uncertain decisions. Some wealthy people like Bill Gates or Steve Jobs ignored formal education and decided to follow their dreams. Although this action may have seemed ridiculous in view of their families or peers, but they ultimately proved that pursuing their dreams and moving opposite to the society's norms paid well in the long term.Hence, those individuals who value their wishes and show diligent effort for that, although regarded as foolish by some people,can turn into idols of the societies.
In summary, while there exists no simple cause and effect relationship between emotion and experiencing regret, I believe that acting according to ration can be better guaranteed for desirable outcome than an impulsive choice.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, finally, hence, if, may, so, therefore, well, while, for example, in summary, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 10.0 19.5258426966 51% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 12.4196629213 72% => OK
Conjunction : 16.0 14.8657303371 108% => OK
Relative clauses : 13.0 11.3162921348 115% => OK
Pronoun: 32.0 33.0505617978 97% => OK
Preposition: 43.0 58.6224719101 73% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 12.9106741573 62% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1782.0 2235.4752809 80% => OK
No of words: 336.0 442.535393258 76% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.30357142857 5.05705443957 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.28139028586 4.55969084622 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.63305070116 2.79657885939 94% => OK
Unique words: 214.0 215.323595506 99% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.636904761905 0.4932671777 129% => OK
syllable_count: 553.5 704.065955056 79% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.59117977528 101% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 5.0 6.24550561798 80% => OK
Article: 0.0 4.99550561798 0% => OK
Subordination: 5.0 3.10617977528 161% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 1.77640449438 169% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.38483146067 68% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 20.2370786517 64% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 25.0 23.0359550562 109% => OK
Sentence length SD: 85.7936839926 60.3974514979 142% => OK
Chars per sentence: 137.076923077 118.986275619 115% => OK
Words per sentence: 25.8461538462 23.4991977007 110% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.15384615385 5.21951772744 175% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.97078651685 80% => OK
Language errors: 10.0 7.80617977528 128% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 10.2758426966 68% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 5.13820224719 97% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 4.83258426966 21% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.159315490925 0.243740707755 65% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0566495063256 0.0831039109588 68% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0532024102436 0.0758088955206 70% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.092359953318 0.150359130593 61% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0623168828021 0.0667264976115 93% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.5 14.1392134831 117% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 46.1 48.8420337079 94% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.92365168539 111% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.0 12.1743820225 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.76 12.1639044944 113% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.48 8.38706741573 113% => OK
difficult_words: 98.0 100.480337079 98% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.5 11.8971910112 97% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.0 11.2143820225 107% => OK
text_standard: 12.0 11.7820224719 102% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Better to have 5/6 paragraphs with 3/4 arguments. And try always support/against one side but compare two sides, like this:
para 1: introduction
para 2: reason 1. address both of the views presented for reason 1
para 3: reason 2. address both of the views presented for reason 2
para 4: reason 3. address both of the views presented for reason 3
para 5: reason 4. address both of the views presented for reason 4 (optional)
para 6: conclusion.
Rates: 50.0 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 3.0 Out of 6
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