The figure below is a town planning map. Showing the likely position of new shopping centres as well as the various different zones and major transportation route of the town. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
Given is a map of an unnamed town with its countryside around. The map apparently shows the diverse different districts plus the main transportation paths of the town. There are also two probable area which are in central business region.
Starting by the first option which is shopping centre A, that is in the middle of the suburbs, illustrates that it can be accessible by own vehicle or train. But by the result of limitation of vehicles on central business, not exactly near the shopping centre, just around the vicinity of it.
Continue with the second probability, shopping centre B, it is relevant that Despite centre A, it is located in the rural area in the outskirt of the residential area. For visiting this option, the both kind of routs are available. Although in this option, it is possible to go nearer to the shopping centre, the central business region is not as large as the first one, and it might be possible to stick in a traffic at the neighbour of it.
The routes being shown, are totally four in number but two in category. One for train which joins the north-west outskirt to almost the south direction. And three main roads for any other kind of vehicle which have a junction to the first business region mentioned before. Obviously all these three paths sources from the junction.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 409, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[1]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'traffic'.
Suggestion: traffic
...e, and it might be possible to stick in a traffic at the neighbour of it. The routes be...
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Line 7, column 37, Rule ID: ADJECTIVE_IN_ATTRIBUTE[1]
Message: A more concise phrase may lose no meaning and sound more powerful.
Suggestion: four
.... The routes being shown, are totally four in number but two in category. One for train whic...
^^^^^^^^^^^^^^
Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, apparently, but, first, if, second, so, kind of
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 6.8 74% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 3.15609756098 222% => Less relative clauses wanted (maybe 'which' is over used).
Pronoun: 14.0 5.60731707317 250% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 36.0 33.7804878049 107% => OK
Nominalization: 5.0 3.97073170732 126% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1089.0 965.302439024 113% => OK
No of words: 229.0 196.424390244 117% => OK
Chars per words: 4.75545851528 4.92477711251 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.89008302616 3.73543355544 104% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.55746860743 2.65546596893 96% => OK
Unique words: 129.0 106.607317073 121% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.563318777293 0.547539520022 103% => OK
syllable_count: 330.3 283.868780488 116% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.45097560976 96% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 4.0 1.53170731707 261% => Less pronouns wanted as sentence beginning.
Article: 4.0 4.33902439024 92% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 3.0 0.482926829268 621% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 0.0 3.36585365854 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 8.94146341463 134% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 22.4926829268 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 47.5514341412 43.030603864 111% => OK
Chars per sentence: 90.75 112.824112599 80% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0833333333 22.9334400587 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.41666666667 5.23603664747 84% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 1.69756097561 118% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 1.0 3.70975609756 27% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 10.0 4.09268292683 244% => Less facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13731889016 0.215688989381 64% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0524847136127 0.103423049105 51% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0687052911535 0.0843802449381 81% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0883466357118 0.15604864568 57% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0684678378424 0.0819641961636 84% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.5 13.2329268293 79% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 69.11 61.2550243902 113% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 6.51609756098 48% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.3 10.3012195122 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 10.33 11.4140731707 91% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.16 8.06136585366 101% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 40.7170731707 128% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.9970731707 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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