Fast food is a part of life in many place. Some people think this has bad effects in lifestyle and diet. Do you agree or disagree? Give reasons.
It is often argued that junk food is becoming a part of survival in many places though it resulted with some negative impacts on livelihood aspect. This essay agrees that consuming street food frequently would definitely create the negative effects on their body and lifestyle. Firstly this essay will discuss the fact that taking packaging food items daily would create the multiple health problems and secondly discuss how it leads to the financial crisis situation because of its high prices.
The foremost problem associate with the street food consumption in daily basic would be poor immunity system. People eat more unhealthy food just because these food are available everywhere with good packaging and they could not get appropriate free time to visit home for healthy food frequently. As a consequent of that, pupils visit hospital most often and spend quite a lot of money for their regular checkup. For example, this is most evident in my country that employee working in banking sector visited hospital more often for their health checkup in comparison to general service worker.
On the other hand, consuming junk food are quite expensive than the home made food. Government have received a higher amount of money from these companies as a tariff and thereby pupils have to spend quite large amount of money and they are running out of economy in terms of managing their survival purpose. For instance, The Himalayan Times recently reported that, 50% of college student in Nepal spend their monthly accommodation amount in consuming packaging food instead of getting healthy food to balance their personal health.
In conclusion, unhealthy food in the form of fast food are being popular among the student and the professional practitioner and because of its consumption they have to face various physical problems and financial crisis situation as well.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 155, Rule ID: THIS_NNS[2]
Message: Did you mean 'this food' or 'these foods'?
Suggestion: this food; these foods
...le eat more unhealthy food just because these food are available everywhere with good pack...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, firstly, if, second, secondly, so, well, for example, for instance, in conclusion, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 9.0 13.1623246493 68% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 36.0 41.998997996 86% => OK
Nominalization: 8.0 8.3376753507 96% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1576.0 1615.20841683 98% => OK
No of words: 302.0 315.596192385 96% => OK
Chars per words: 5.21854304636 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.1687104957 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.49127242872 2.80592935109 89% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.556291390728 0.561755894193 99% => OK
syllable_count: 485.1 506.74238477 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 16.0721442886 68% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 51.975995731 49.4020404114 105% => OK
Chars per sentence: 143.272727273 106.682146367 134% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.4545454545 20.7667163134 132% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.72727272727 7.06120827912 138% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 1.0 5.01903807615 20% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 5.0 3.9879759519 125% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.141257442704 0.244688304435 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0600139549235 0.084324248473 71% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0485460994749 0.0667982634062 73% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0884411398349 0.151304729494 58% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0472857452674 0.056905535591 83% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.9 13.0946893788 129% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.29 12.4159519038 107% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.05 8.58950901804 105% => OK
difficult_words: 78.0 78.4519038076 99% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 9.78957915832 112% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 14.0 10.7795591182 130% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 67.4157303371 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.0 Out of 9
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