Big salary is much more important than job satisfaction. Do you agree or disagree.
Earning money has a significant role in people’s health. This means that if you have more income, probably you have more freedom to follow your liberty. While it is not always true, in my opinion, money could not outweigh to the happiness of people. In this essay, I will outline why I believe the job itself could lead us to welfare if your heart does it.
To begin with, happiness or in other words, joyfulness is impossible to measure. Imagine that If you earn one million dollars annually how you can spend it if you are not a healthy guy. It seems to be that you finally reach this amount of money by hardworking and a lot of sacrifices. You have worked full time throughout a year, and you couldn’t go on vacation with your family on holiday to reach this target. So if you finally hit this target, you will lose your attraction to the job because money was the only reason for you to make you eager to continue this path. So what is the reason behind this success?
It is evident that some internal motivation leads us to this level. Without any doubt, if you like what you do, eventually, will take what you deserve in your life. I have heard a lot of famous people which they initiate from nothing but because they firmly believe in what they are doing finally reach the climax of success. This is so accurate that money quickly vanished if you couldn’t find how to earn it sustainably. As a result, it is better to figure out how to enjoy your profession rather than fill up your pocket with dollars.
In sum, money has a vital role in people’s growth, even though it couldn’t outweigh to the level of fulfillment. If people learn how to enjoy their job, it leads them to prosperity and welfare. In my view, nowadays more people are looking to earn more money without finding out what they are good at. So that people chose unintentionally what others believe is the most proper way to this purpose.
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...hout finding out what they are good at. So that people chose unintentionally what other...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, finally, if, look, so, while, as a result, in my opinion, in my view, in other words, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 13.0 13.1623246493 99% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 5.0 10.4138276553 48% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 62.0 24.0651302605 258% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 50.0 41.998997996 119% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 8.3376753507 48% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1594.0 1615.20841683 99% => OK
No of words: 350.0 315.596192385 111% => OK
Chars per words: 4.55428571429 5.12529762239 89% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.32530772707 4.20363070211 103% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.52720059693 2.80592935109 90% => OK
Unique words: 183.0 176.041082164 104% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.522857142857 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 494.1 506.74238477 98% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 10.0 5.43587174349 184% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 6.0 2.10420841683 285% => Less adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 19.0 16.0721442886 118% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 28.5952749714 49.4020404114 58% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 83.8947368421 106.682146367 79% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4210526316 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 5.47368421053 7.06120827912 78% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 4.0 5.01903807615 80% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 14.0 8.67935871743 161% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 3.9879759519 25% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.154166164173 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0487194979401 0.084324248473 58% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0510757407833 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.100288440598 0.151304729494 66% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0284148469845 0.056905535591 50% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.2 13.0946893788 70% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 70.13 50.2224549098 140% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 7.9 11.3001002004 70% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.11 12.4159519038 73% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.06 8.58950901804 82% => OK
difficult_words: 56.0 78.4519038076 71% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 8.0 10.7795591182 74% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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