The two pie charts below show the percentage of industry sectors’s contribution to the economy of Turkey in 2000 and 2016.
The pie charts illustrate the information about the proportion of contribution to the economy of Turkey by 8 various sectors during 2000 and 2016.
In overall, agriculture , healthcare and education constituted a major industrial fields which give for economy ; because, construction, finance business and other contributing least percentage.
It can be seen from the information that contribution to the economy by agriculture sector accounted nearly a quarter in 2000; whilst, it declined at 14% during 2016 in particular nation. In addition to this, construction contributed for economy had experienced a rise of more than three-fold of the total percentage between 2000 and 2016 in Turkey. Interestingly, contribution by healthcare and education remained relatively consistent at 17% in both years. Apart from that, there were a 4% of an increase can be observed contribution of manufacturing field.
The charts further prove that proportion of trade,utilities and transportation had experienced a two percent growth from 2000 to 2016 in specific region. Moreover, a declineed of 3% can be noticed in contribution to economy by leisure and hospitality and government sectors in Turkey. Lastly, finance business and other contribution to the economy of Turkey were found 8% and 5% respectively during 2016 and 2000.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, if, lastly, moreover, apart from, in addition, in particular
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 11.0 10.4138276553 106% => OK
Relative clauses : 4.0 7.30460921844 55% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 6.0 24.0651302605 25% => OK
Preposition: 37.0 41.998997996 88% => OK
Nominalization: 18.0 8.3376753507 216% => Less nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1122.0 1615.20841683 69% => OK
No of words: 201.0 315.596192385 64% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.58208955224 5.12529762239 109% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.76529505866 4.20363070211 90% => OK
Word Length SD: 3.41446477942 2.80592935109 122% => OK
Unique words: 114.0 176.041082164 65% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.567164179104 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 341.1 506.74238477 67% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 3.0 4.76152304609 63% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 16.0721442886 56% => Need more sentences. Double check the format of sentences, make sure there is a space between two sentences, or have enough periods. And also check the lengths of sentences, maybe they are too long.
Sentence length: 22.0 20.2975951904 108% => OK
Sentence length SD: 30.5432298372 49.4020404114 62% => OK
Chars per sentence: 124.666666667 106.682146367 117% => OK
Words per sentence: 22.3333333333 20.7667163134 108% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.22222222222 7.06120827912 102% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 4.0 8.67935871743 46% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.407446363772 0.244688304435 167% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.172452473498 0.084324248473 205% => Sentence topic similarity is high.
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.105259566927 0.0667982634062 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.266114094237 0.151304729494 176% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.112754626325 0.056905535591 198% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 40.69 50.2224549098 81% => OK
smog_index: 13.0 7.44779559118 175% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.1 11.3001002004 116% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.38 12.4159519038 124% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.81 8.58950901804 103% => OK
difficult_words: 52.0 78.4519038076 66% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 16.5 9.78957915832 169% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.8 10.1190380762 107% => OK
text_standard: 16.0 10.7795591182 148% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Minimum 250 words wanted.
Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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