Tourism is encouraged in many countries. Does tourism bring more advantages or disadvantages to a country.
People travel to break from routine, for business or other purposes. traveling to different countries helps vacationers to relax as well as exchange cultural values. Whether tourism is always good for a country? this conundrum is discussed in detail in the essay below.
Some countries like Maldives and Indonesia are known to be thriving on tourism backed activities. It helps the authorities to develop backward regions of the country and provide livelihood to their regional people. On a more social level, tourism leads to intercultural interaction. Tourists often engage and learn from the locals. tourism can also increase pride in locals. Because many people visit a place, the burning issues of that region can be brought to the world stage, such as, issues like deforestation of Brazilian rainforest.
On the other hand, there is a growing debate among academician about the concept of “over tourism”. there is an environmental impact on the places visited by many people. During the hiking season, the human waste, abandon mountaineering gears and trash is littered on the slopes of Mt. Everest. there are also recent reports of deaths due to overcrowding to reach the summit of the peak. Not only this, due to many people visiting the place, the ecosystem is disturbed and many wildlife and marine life have to face untimely extinction. For example, there is decline of turtle population on the Boracay island of Philippines.
Based on the above discussion, tourism does bring development to the region but can also disturb the local habitat. A balance needs to be achieved to boost the economy and minimise the damage to the country.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: Traveling
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...r tourism is always good for a country? this conundrum is discussed in detail in the...
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Suggestion: Tourism
...often engage and learn from the locals. tourism can also increase pride in locals. Beca...
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...he concept of 'over tourism'. there is an environmental impact on the place...
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...littered on the slopes of Mt. Everest. there are also recent reports of deaths due t...
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Message: Possible agreement error. The noun wildlife seems to be uncountable; consider using: 'much wildlife', 'a good deal of wildlife'.
Suggestion: much wildlife; a good deal of wildlife
...e place, the ecosystem is disturbed and many wildlife and marine life have to face untimely e...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, so, well, for example, such as, as well as, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 12.0 13.1623246493 91% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 3.0 7.85571142285 38% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 7.30460921844 14% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 5.0 24.0651302605 21% => OK
Preposition: 46.0 41.998997996 110% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1402.0 1615.20841683 87% => OK
No of words: 269.0 315.596192385 85% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.21189591078 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.0498419064 4.20363070211 96% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.80025604572 2.80592935109 100% => OK
Unique words: 167.0 176.041082164 95% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.620817843866 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 445.5 506.74238477 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 4.0 2.52805611222 158% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 18.0 16.0721442886 112% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 20.2975951904 69% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 33.4335992013 49.4020404114 68% => OK
Chars per sentence: 77.8888888889 106.682146367 73% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9444444444 20.7667163134 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.22222222222 7.06120827912 60% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 5.01903807615 139% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 5.0 3.4128256513 147% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.204550792237 0.244688304435 84% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0567550379304 0.084324248473 67% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0644409539407 0.0667982634062 96% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.116725498484 0.151304729494 77% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.050534006013 0.056905535591 89% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.6 13.0946893788 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 48.81 50.2224549098 97% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.9 11.3001002004 88% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.35 12.4159519038 99% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.61 8.58950901804 112% => OK
difficult_words: 90.0 78.4519038076 115% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 5.0 9.78957915832 51% => Linsear_write_formula is low.
gunning_fog: 7.6 10.1190380762 75% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.