today more attention is paid to men sports the women what are the cause? is it a positive or negative development?
These days, people more interest in men's sport, in contrast, the women's. Many social and political issue take part in this inclination. I think this phenomenon could have a negative effect on the growth of the female's athletic community.
There are many reasons for this problem. Firstly, the mentalities of social bias to the limited talent of the women. To illustrate, people think that females should sit at home, grow up their children and cook for the family, especially in patriarchal societies think that it would be shameful if their women participant sports competition on the ground in front of others. Hence, sportswomen are less famous than the opposite gender. Secondly, the financial support of women's sports, whether from the government or athletic brands, are less than males. In many countries, the government gives more fund to male athletes; females, profit. For instance, the females' football dramatically achieves lower rewards, in contrast, male's award in the world cup; and this discrimination is also happening in their annual incomes.
The result of this will affect the ambition of participation of females in sports events. Due to lack of motivation and financial support, many females discourage to continue the sports profession. This favouritism also impacts on the physical and mental health problem, it does not only exist in professional sport, in fanatic society, but women also have limitation even to go to the gym, leading to the spread of female obesity. Do some exercise could help to eliminate mental issues such as anxiety and stress. For healthful society, we need healthy women.
In conclusion, although female sports have achieved huge aims in contrast past; the main attention absorbs males. This occurrence has undeniable adverse consequences on athlete female community.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 7, column 658, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[1]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'females'' or 'female's'?
Suggestion: females'; female's
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Line 11, column 180, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'sports'' or 'sport's'?
Suggestion: sports'; sport's
...many females discourage to continue the sports profession. This favouritism also impac...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, firstly, hence, if, second, secondly, so, as to, for instance, i think, in conclusion, in contrast, such as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 13.1623246493 38% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 7.85571142285 76% => OK
Conjunction : 8.0 10.4138276553 77% => OK
Relative clauses : 2.0 7.30460921844 27% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 17.0 24.0651302605 71% => OK
Preposition: 41.0 41.998997996 98% => OK
Nominalization: 12.0 8.3376753507 144% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1549.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 287.0 315.596192385 91% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.39721254355 5.12529762239 105% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.11595363751 4.20363070211 98% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.76291021612 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 179.0 176.041082164 102% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.623693379791 0.561755894193 111% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.60771543086 106% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 6.0 5.43587174349 110% => OK
Article: 7.0 2.52805611222 277% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 6.0 4.76152304609 126% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 59.7755895602 49.4020404114 121% => OK
Chars per sentence: 91.1176470588 106.682146367 85% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.8823529412 20.7667163134 81% => OK
Discourse Markers: 7.35294117647 7.06120827912 104% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 8.67935871743 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 6.0 3.9879759519 150% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.13047744382 0.244688304435 53% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0422379632978 0.084324248473 50% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0420676198665 0.0667982634062 63% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0847303250371 0.151304729494 56% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0220018580609 0.056905535591 39% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.4 13.0946893788 95% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 46.78 50.2224549098 93% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.7 11.3001002004 95% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.74 12.4159519038 111% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.55 8.58950901804 111% => OK
difficult_words: 93.0 78.4519038076 119% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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