celebrities' opinions are more important to younger people than older people?
Recently, entertainers and celebrities have had great impact on socities. Some people believe that young peolpe are more influenced by celebrities' opinions; however, there is a substintial body of evidence claims that older people are more affected by entertainers' thinking. From a personal perspective, the former point of view carries more wieght, given that teenagers are more active on social media, young and naive. Below I will strive to explain my supporting point in more details.
The first and foremost point, younger people who access the internet have social media accounts; furthermore , they follow celebrities' accounts eithr on Fcebook, Twitter or Instagram. A vivid example that can be given to shed light on what was elaborated above is, during the last Egyptian presidential election, the famous Singer Amr Diad revealed his political political point of view that, he will vote to Abdel- fatah El-sisi. Thus, may of his teeanagers fans got affected by his opinion and voted to the same candidate. however, older people did not affected because they were not active on social media accounts. Consequently, younger peolpe care about celeverities' opinions more than older people.
Next, coupled with social media, youth is another reasons why young people follow famous people. For instance, the Liverpool footballer Mohamed Salah is ana icon and role model for many teeanagers, given tha he embodies the ideals for a young person who has achieved his dreams. Moreover, youth usually are interested in people who fall in their own ages. Therefore, young peolpe are more influenced by celebrities.
Although the pervious reasons are the first ones which cross the mind at a glance, they are not the only reasons available. There is another subtle point must be born in mind. older peolpe believe that they are wise enough; hence , they just trust their own ideas. On the other hand, young peolpe are naive to the reality of the world, they are more susceptible to the inflence of others. A survey conducted by The Psycological National Association in California found older people do not affected by celebrities' thoughts in the economical and political topics. Provided that older people don not trust entertainers, they will not be influnced with their opinions. As a result, famous people point of viewa are not important to older people.
Taking everything into consideration; without a doubt, the opinions od celebrities are more important to younger people than they are to older people. It is suggested guide teenagers to be influenced with just the positive side of celebrities' life.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
consequently, first, furthermore, hence, however, if, may, moreover, so, therefore, thus, for instance, as a result, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 25.0 15.1003584229 166% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 6.0 9.8082437276 61% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 13.8261648746 51% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 11.0 11.0286738351 100% => OK
Pronoun: 27.0 43.0788530466 63% => OK
Preposition: 47.0 52.1666666667 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.0752688172 74% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2196.0 1977.66487455 111% => OK
No of words: 418.0 407.700716846 103% => OK
Chars per words: 5.25358851675 4.8611393121 108% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.52162009685 4.48103885553 101% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.70245856822 2.67179642975 101% => OK
Unique words: 223.0 212.727598566 105% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.533492822967 0.524837075471 102% => OK
syllable_count: 690.3 618.680645161 112% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.51630824373 112% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 9.59856630824 73% => OK
Article: 7.0 3.08781362007 227% => Less articles wanted as sentence beginning.
Subordination: 3.0 3.51792114695 85% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 1.86738351254 0% => OK
Preposition: 5.0 4.94265232975 101% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 22.0 20.6003584229 107% => OK
Sentence length: 19.0 20.1344086022 94% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.700485759 48.9658058833 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 99.8181818182 100.406767564 99% => OK
Words per sentence: 19.0 20.6045352989 92% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.09090909091 5.45110844103 112% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.53405017921 110% => OK
Language errors: 12.0 5.5376344086 217% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 12.0 11.8709677419 101% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.85842293907 104% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 4.88709677419 123% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.387091882326 0.236089414692 164% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.117070573948 0.076458572812 153% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.121880300908 0.0737576698707 165% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.238950718401 0.150856017488 158% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0963938569824 0.0645574589148 149% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.8 11.7677419355 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 43.73 58.1214874552 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.10430107527 144% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.9 10.1575268817 117% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 10.9000537634 121% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.58 8.01818996416 107% => OK
difficult_words: 106.0 86.8835125448 122% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 11.0 10.002688172 110% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.6 10.0537634409 95% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.247311828 88% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 81.6666666667 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 24.5 Out of 30
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.