With all the problems in the world today, spending money on space exploration is a completely waste. The money could be better spent on other causes. Discuss.
It is often said that if a citizen will happy than their country will definitely progressing. However, today world’s faces majority of hurdles and poverty and unemployment is major complications so it’s not good to use wealth on space exploration by regime. Moreover, these money could be use on various obstacles to improve them. There are uncountable complications along with measures to tackle this problem.
The major two hurdles of this notion is poverty and unemployment which can play essentially role to stop growth of globe because if authorities will be spending a vast amounts of wealth on space research then others fields will surely neglected by government due to this whole world suffering with poverty. Apart from that, regime have not remaining enough money after using on space exploration so authorities should be failed to improve poorness of globe and not eligible to offer services to poor masses. In addition to this, a number of jobless people will also be escalating day by day the reason is that after expanding money on space research some time world suffers from debit situation so they are not give their attention to job sectors and numbers of jobs opportunities will be falling. For example, India launched Chandrayaan-2 at 6 September 2019 and send it on moon but unluckily it’s unsuccessful as well as Indian regime spent 10 crores on it which is totally waste . India government use this money to better solve other problems.
Nevertheless, there are a vast number of measures to solve this hurdles and the first is that today world is enduring from poverty so authorities should use money to improve poorness in the place of space researching. In other words, if human can alive then globe also alive. In addition to this, To solve unemployment regime could expand a majority of wealth to set up trades, industries and other business to give jobs chances to jobless people and improve conditions of poverty. Beside this, if government will open domestic trades in villages to progress the poor condition and unemployment of countryside. For example, Australia opens a some amount of business, factories and trades in villages to offer them income and job chances to young ones to grow conditions of country.
In conclusion, although, spending money on space exploration is good for some extent but a large amount expand on its is a cause of many problems, so that is why this money is used to spend on another factors for the growth of globe.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, first, however, if, moreover, nevertheless, so, then, well, apart from, for example, in addition, in conclusion, as well as, in other words
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 13.0 7.85571142285 165% => OK
Conjunction : 14.0 10.4138276553 134% => OK
Relative clauses : 7.0 7.30460921844 96% => OK
Pronoun: 26.0 24.0651302605 108% => OK
Preposition: 67.0 41.998997996 160% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 2085.0 1615.20841683 129% => OK
No of words: 416.0 315.596192385 132% => OK
Chars per words: 5.01201923077 5.12529762239 98% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.51620172871 4.20363070211 107% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.78211773291 2.80592935109 99% => OK
Unique words: 204.0 176.041082164 116% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.490384615385 0.561755894193 87% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 656.1 506.74238477 129% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 2.0 2.52805611222 79% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.809619238477 0% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 15.0 16.0721442886 93% => OK
Sentence length: 27.0 20.2975951904 133% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively long.
Sentence length SD: 77.7838600796 49.4020404114 157% => OK
Chars per sentence: 139.0 106.682146367 130% => OK
Words per sentence: 27.7333333333 20.7667163134 134% => OK
Discourse Markers: 10.0 7.06120827912 142% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 8.0 5.01903807615 159% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 7.0 3.9879759519 176% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 0.0 3.4128256513 0% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.247878895966 0.244688304435 101% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0859682026658 0.084324248473 102% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616355173083 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.165044094743 0.151304729494 109% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0437399778597 0.056905535591 77% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 16.0 13.0946893788 122% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 44.07 50.2224549098 88% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 7.44779559118 118% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 13.8 11.3001002004 122% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 12.07 12.4159519038 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.32 8.58950901804 97% => OK
difficult_words: 88.0 78.4519038076 112% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 12.0 9.78957915832 123% => OK
gunning_fog: 12.8 10.1190380762 126% => OK
text_standard: 13.0 10.7795591182 121% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 73.0337078652 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.5 Out of 9
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