Plastic Surgery in Korea
A glance chart depicts number of plastic surgery procedures conducted by Korean men and women in
2014. it is evident that Korean female are more tempted to perform cosmetic surgeries with over
hundred numbers of users than Korean male.
Elegance and glamour are important for women live in Korea, especially eyelid appearance. It has the
highest number of surgery users of approaching 350.000, followed by nose surgery, so-called
Rhinoplasty with almost 300.000 users. Korean female also concern with cosmetic surgery for other
eye-catching bodies, such as skin, breast and lips, so as to attract their beauty.
As well as women, Korean men are contributed to artificial body-shape surgeries in recent years. The
hair transplantation are the most popular cosmetic operation among other surgeries for men. Skin
resurfacing, nose reshaping and moreover abdominoplasty, a stomach surgery, are also undergone by
averagely 20.000 to 60.000 men in Korea. Beyond this, Korean men also perform other type of
surgeries with number of below 20.000.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, if, moreover, so, well, as to, such as, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 6.0 7.0 86% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 0.0 1.00243902439 0% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 6.8 59% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.15609756098 32% => OK
Pronoun: 5.0 5.60731707317 89% => OK
Preposition: 25.0 33.7804878049 74% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 909.0 965.302439024 94% => OK
No of words: 161.0 196.424390244 82% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.64596273292 4.92477711251 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.56210296601 3.73543355544 95% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7681523324 2.65546596893 104% => OK
Unique words: 102.0 106.607317073 96% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.633540372671 0.547539520022 116% => OK
syllable_count: 272.7 283.868780488 96% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.7 1.45097560976 117% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 3.0 4.33902439024 69% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.07073170732 93% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 3.36585365854 30% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 9.0 8.94146341463 101% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 23.8363763921 43.030603864 55% => The essay contains lots of sentences with the similar length. More sentence varieties wanted.
Chars per sentence: 101.0 112.824112599 90% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.8888888889 22.9334400587 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.77777777778 5.23603664747 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 12.0 3.83414634146 313% => Less paragraphs wanted.
Language errors: 9.0 1.69756097561 530% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 3.70975609756 189% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.13902439024 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 4.09268292683 49% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.242761849098 0.215688989381 113% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0998533715035 0.103423049105 97% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0423799718376 0.0843802449381 50% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0837038155497 0.15604864568 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0612972903509 0.0819641961636 75% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 14.1 13.2329268293 107% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 45.76 61.2550243902 75% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 11.1 10.3012195122 108% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 15.19 11.4140731707 133% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.29 8.06136585366 115% => OK
difficult_words: 49.0 40.7170731707 120% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 11.4329268293 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Maximum four paragraphs wanted.
Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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