The school library is seeking applicants for a job over summer break. Write a letter to the library’s manager, in your letter include:
– A brief introduction of yourself
– Your experience and relevant skills
– Why you want the job
Dear Sir,
I am writing this letter in relation to the advertised position of library Assistant at your school over summer break in the Daily Times newspaper.
I have done Bachelors in International relations from LUMS. I have since worked as a library manager for various libraries around the city. I was most recently working as library manager at saint pauls library. Where I was responsible for keeping the library up and running. To issue library cards. Also to help library-goers to search, check out and return library material.
Furthermore, I have strong interpersonal, communication as well as writing skills. I have full command on computer literacy and MS Office. I believe my experience and skills make me a suitable candidate for this job. Please find my Cv attached for your perusal. If you have any further questions, you can contact me on the mentioned email address.
I look forward to discussing this opportunity further at interview.
Regards,
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Dear Sir, I am writing this letter in relation to ...
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...mer break in the Daily Times newspaper. I have done Bachelors in International r...
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...s in International relations from LUMS. I have since worked as a library manager ...
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... for various libraries around the city. I was most recently working as library ma...
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...tly working as library manager at saint pauls library. Where I was responsible for ke...
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...up and running. To issue library cards. Also to help library-goers to search, check ...
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... check out and return library material. Furthermore, I have strong interpersonal...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, furthermore, if, look, so, well, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 2.0 7.48453608247 27% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 1.0 4.92783505155 20% => OK
Conjunction : 4.0 5.05154639175 79% => OK
Relative clauses : 1.0 3.03092783505 33% => OK
Pronoun: 20.0 32.9175257732 61% => OK
Preposition: 20.0 26.3917525773 76% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.85567010309 104% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 822.0 937.175257732 88% => OK
No of words: 158.0 206.0 77% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.20253164557 4.54256449028 115% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.54539209256 3.78020617076 94% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.9598945598 2.54303337028 116% => OK
Unique words: 108.0 127.690721649 85% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.683544303797 0.622605031667 110% => OK
syllable_count: 255.6 290.88556701 88% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.41237113402 113% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 9.0 9.13402061856 99% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 1.83505154639 54% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 1.0 1.44329896907 69% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 13.0 12.6804123711 103% => OK
Sentence length: 12.0 16.3608247423 73% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 30.1977702065 44.8134815571 67% => OK
Chars per sentence: 63.2307692308 76.5299724578 83% => OK
Words per sentence: 12.1538461538 16.8248392259 72% => OK
Discourse Markers: 3.76923076923 4.34317383033 87% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 7.0 2.54639175258 275% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 7.41237113402 81% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 1.49484536082 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 7.0 3.94845360825 177% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.284244358585 0.216113520407 132% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0851935678335 0.0766984524023 111% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0721594755448 0.0603063233224 120% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.146355982869 0.12726935374 115% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.100420736367 0.0580467560999 173% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.1 8.37731958763 109% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 59.3 70.7449484536 84% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.0 7.45979381443 107% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.99 8.71597938144 138% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.63 7.59969072165 114% => OK
difficult_words: 44.0 41.2886597938 107% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 6.0 8.62886597938 70% => OK
gunning_fog: 6.8 8.54432989691 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 8.15463917526 110% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.