In education and employment, some people work harder than others. Why do some people work harder? Is it always a good thing to work hard?
At school and work some people put more effort than others. This essay will talk about the reasons to why people work harder and if hard working has advantages.
To begin with, in every school and job there is a bunch of nerds and up late workers. Students that study more than the others actually do care about learning and their future. For that reason, they spend more time learning since they know it has a huge affect on their college application in the future. In addition, diligent workers are aiming for either a specific salary or a promotion. For example, if a high school students wants to receive education from a certain university, but this university has some requires like acing a couple of exams, hence he will be keen on studying to enter the university he desires.
Furthermore, being dedicated to your work and education actually pays off at the end. It is known that the more you give the more you will receive at the end. For example, if the boss noticed a worker that has been energetic and trying his best even though some things might not be working for his benefit, the boss would eventually offer a raise.
Moreover, an industrious employee or child would never have regrets as they grow older even if they didn’t reach their goals, because by then they know that they have done the best they could ever do.
To sum up, people with no future vision tend to not care about placing out all they could to their education or work. On the other hand, the person who has faith in themselves will stay up all night trying to achieve their objective. In the end, god never allows your precious time and effort to go to waste.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
actually, but, furthermore, hence, if, moreover, so, then, for example, in addition, to begin with, to sum up, on the other hand
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 7.0 13.1623246493 53% => More to be verbs wanted.
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 7.85571142285 115% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 7.30460921844 82% => OK
Pronoun: 31.0 24.0651302605 129% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 38.0 41.998997996 90% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1381.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 298.0 315.596192385 94% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.63422818792 5.12529762239 90% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.15483772266 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.25574253796 2.80592935109 80% => OK
Unique words: 171.0 176.041082164 97% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.573825503356 0.561755894193 102% => OK
syllable_count: 419.4 506.74238477 83% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.60771543086 87% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 3.0 5.43587174349 55% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 3.0 2.10420841683 143% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 7.0 4.76152304609 147% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 14.0 16.0721442886 87% => OK
Sentence length: 21.0 20.2975951904 103% => OK
Sentence length SD: 51.3972126617 49.4020404114 104% => OK
Chars per sentence: 98.6428571429 106.682146367 92% => OK
Words per sentence: 21.2857142857 20.7667163134 102% => OK
Discourse Markers: 9.14285714286 7.06120827912 129% => OK
Paragraphs: 5.0 4.38176352705 114% => OK
Language errors: 5.0 5.01903807615 100% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 8.0 8.67935871743 92% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 2.0 3.9879759519 50% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 3.4128256513 117% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.245583178121 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0900183072271 0.084324248473 107% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.127112422251 0.0667982634062 190% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.162792735076 0.151304729494 108% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.187726741507 0.056905535591 330% => More connections among paragraphs wanted.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 11.0 13.0946893788 84% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 67.08 50.2224549098 134% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.1 11.3001002004 81% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.57 12.4159519038 77% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.49 8.58950901804 87% => OK
difficult_words: 53.0 78.4519038076 68% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 10.4 10.1190380762 103% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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