The diagram below shows how geothermal energy is used to produce electricity.
Summaries the information by selecting and reporting main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
The pictorial representations illustrates the information about the production of electricity by using geothermal energy.
In overall, there are five stages to make power. Even though each steps are crucial for generating electricity and omission of any step will halt the process .
It can be seen from the information that in first stage a cold water is pumping down at 4.5 km with the help of pumps in the big box who attached in underground land. After this, the cold water is well inject in box. Secondly, the cold water is passing through geothermal zone which is the mixture of hot rocks as well as water becomes change their temperature from cold to hot.
The diagram further proves that in the next step, water is pumping up with using pipes and that water send into condenser. In contrast, the production of electricity is working well. In the fourth stage, a hot water is taking a shape of strain condenser. Lastly, turbine is taking energy from condenser as form of stream and generator is powered by turbine as well generator is starting to generate electricity. Eventually, this electricity is sending to geothermal power plant for use.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 1, column 31, Rule ID: AGREEMENT_SENT_START[2]
Message: You should probably use 'illustrate'.
Suggestion: illustrate
The pictorial representations illustrates the information about the production of...
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Message: Don't put a space before the full stop
Suggestion: .
...ission of any step will halt the process . It can be seen from the information t...
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Line 5, column 57, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'cold water'.
Suggestion: cold water
...rom the information that in first stage a cold water is pumping down at 4.5 km with the help...
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Line 5, column 203, Rule ID: BEEN_PART_AGREEMENT[2]
Message: Consider using a past participle here: 'injected'.
Suggestion: injected
...and. After this, the cold water is well inject in box. Secondly, the cold water is pas...
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Line 7, column 205, Rule ID: A_UNCOUNTABLE[3]
Message: Uncountable nouns are usually not used with an indefinite article. Use simply 'hot water'.
Suggestion: hot water
...y is working well. In the fourth stage, a hot water is taking a shape of strain condenser. ...
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Line 7, column 346, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
... form of stream and generator is powered by turbine as well generator is starting...
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
first, lastly, second, secondly, well, as for, in contrast, as well as
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 14.0 7.0 200% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 2.0 1.00243902439 200% => OK
Conjunction : 3.0 6.8 44% => More conjunction wanted.
Relative clauses : 5.0 3.15609756098 158% => OK
Pronoun: 7.0 5.60731707317 125% => Less pronouns wanted
Preposition: 33.0 33.7804878049 98% => OK
Nominalization: 4.0 3.97073170732 101% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 961.0 965.302439024 100% => OK
No of words: 195.0 196.424390244 99% => OK
Chars per words: 4.92820512821 4.92477711251 100% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.73687570622 3.73543355544 100% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.77562274682 2.65546596893 105% => OK
Unique words: 117.0 106.607317073 110% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.6 0.547539520022 110% => OK
syllable_count: 297.9 283.868780488 105% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.45097560976 103% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 1.53170731707 131% => OK
Article: 6.0 4.33902439024 138% => OK
Subordination: 2.0 1.07073170732 187% => OK
Conjunction: 0.0 0.482926829268 0% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 3.36585365854 119% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 11.0 8.94146341463 123% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 22.4926829268 76% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 43.4037359857 43.030603864 101% => OK
Chars per sentence: 87.3636363636 112.824112599 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.7272727273 22.9334400587 77% => OK
Discourse Markers: 6.36363636364 5.23603664747 122% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 3.83414634146 104% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 1.69756097561 353% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 6.0 3.70975609756 162% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 1.0 1.13902439024 88% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 4.0 4.09268292683 98% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.0927217389962 0.215688989381 43% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0382687909078 0.103423049105 37% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0389423840034 0.0843802449381 46% => Sentences are similar to each other.
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0654396851374 0.15604864568 42% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0416499184317 0.0819641961636 51% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.7 13.2329268293 81% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 61.2550243902 102% => OK
smog_index: 8.8 6.51609756098 135% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 10.3012195122 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.02 11.4140731707 97% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.96 8.06136585366 99% => OK
difficult_words: 43.0 40.7170731707 106% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 11.4329268293 74% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.9970731707 80% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 11.0658536585 81% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 78.6516853933 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 7.0 Out of 9
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