Bullying is a big problem in many schools.
What do you think are the causes of this? What solutions can you suggest?
it is true that bullying in schools is becoming more severe and happening frequently. While this is a severe problem, it can be solved by teaching students proper online etiquette.
The main cause of increased bullying is the easy access to the internet and social media which students now enjoy. The constant presence of the internet now means that students can be bullied through computers or mobile phones. They no longer have to be face-to-face with their tormentor and can suffer from harassment regardless of time or place. Not only that, this means that teachers have no resources to help prevent cyberbullying because they cannot oversee what goes on online. To provide an idea of the scale of the problem, a survey stated that 42 percent of students have been harassed online. Many received hurtful messages, and some even got them everyday. Such statistics are far higher compared to just a decade ago when smartphones and home computers were not as commonplace.
However, there are solutions to this problem. One of the ways to restrict bullying is to educate students about the importance of being respectful and polite to others on the internet. Understanding harmful effects of mean comments on social media is an important and effective step towards preventing bullying online. For instance, some schools are now offering classes in which teachers show students negative impacts of cyberbullying and explain proper online etiquette. they have caused students to start treating others with mor respect online, and the number of counseling sessions related to bullying in these schools is decreasing.
To sum up, it is clear that the prevalance of the internet and social media has made bullying more common. Nevertheless, this problem can be resolved with teaching students the importance of being well-mannered online.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
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Suggestion: every day
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
however, nevertheless, so, well, while, for instance, it is true, to sum up
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 19.0 13.1623246493 144% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 5.0 7.85571142285 64% => OK
Conjunction : 12.0 10.4138276553 115% => OK
Relative clauses : 9.0 7.30460921844 123% => OK
Pronoun: 19.0 24.0651302605 79% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 6.0 8.3376753507 72% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1548.0 1615.20841683 96% => OK
No of words: 295.0 315.596192385 93% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 5.24745762712 5.12529762239 102% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.14434120667 4.20363070211 99% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.7595052619 2.80592935109 98% => OK
Unique words: 168.0 176.041082164 95% => OK
Unique words percentage: 0.569491525424 0.561755894193 101% => OK
syllable_count: 474.3 506.74238477 94% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 7.0 5.43587174349 129% => OK
Article: 3.0 2.52805611222 119% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 2.0 0.809619238477 247% => Less conjunction wanted as sentence beginning.
Preposition: 2.0 4.76152304609 42% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 18.0 20.2975951904 89% => OK
Sentence length SD: 29.8809486755 49.4020404114 60% => OK
Chars per sentence: 96.75 106.682146367 91% => OK
Words per sentence: 18.4375 20.7667163134 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.6875 7.06120827912 66% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 3.0 8.67935871743 35% => More positive sentences wanted.
Sentences with negative sentiment : 12.0 3.9879759519 301% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 1.0 3.4128256513 29% => More facts, knowledge or examples wanted.
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.155166613723 0.244688304435 63% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0584636956005 0.084324248473 69% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0518174808007 0.0667982634062 78% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.102092667216 0.151304729494 67% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.00960483289143 0.056905535591 17% => Paragraphs are similar to each other. Some content may get duplicated or it is not exactly right on the topic.
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 12.5 13.0946893788 95% => OK
flesch_reading_ease: 53.21 50.2224549098 106% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 10.3 11.3001002004 91% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 13.17 12.4159519038 106% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 9.08 8.58950901804 106% => OK
difficult_words: 85.0 78.4519038076 108% => OK
linsear_write_formula: 7.5 9.78957915832 77% => OK
gunning_fog: 9.2 10.1190380762 91% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.