youngsters nowadays prefer to live on their own and leave their families. is this a positive or a negative development?
In recent times, many young people, across the world, prefer to live alone away from their parents. This is a negative development as family is utmost important in one's life. Also, they contribute and sacrifice a lot to raise their children.
To begin with, it is a known fact that a person is most happy when they are surrounded by their family. Leaving one's family and living a solitary life can affect the mind of the young people, which, in turn, can have detrimental effects on their mental health. Moreover, they can get influenced by bad company and get into habits, like drugs or crime. In a recent survey conducted by the Times magazine, it was found that 30% of the teens who left their families were either involved in drugs or criminal activities.
People in the family dedicate their time, money, emotion, and energy to raise their kids in the best possible way. They make sure that their child gets the best of everything. It is a moral responsibility of the child to do the same when they start earning. Parents play a vital role in guiding them at every stage of their life because of their experience. Staying with family members always gives profound happiness to the people. In a research conducted by the Oxford University, it was found that people living with their families were 60% more happy than who did not.
In conclusion, family members have an essential role to play in people's life. Living alone may give people a sense of freedom for a while. However, as humans we always want companionship and want to be surrounded by our dear ones.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
also, but, however, if, may, moreover, so, while, in conclusion, to begin with
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 11.0 13.1623246493 84% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 4.0 7.85571142285 51% => OK
Conjunction : 7.0 10.4138276553 67% => OK
Relative clauses : 8.0 7.30460921844 110% => OK
Pronoun: 28.0 24.0651302605 116% => OK
Preposition: 40.0 41.998997996 95% => OK
Nominalization: 2.0 8.3376753507 24% => More nominalizations (nouns with a suffix like: tion ment ence ance) wanted.
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1308.0 1615.20841683 81% => OK
No of words: 276.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.73913043478 5.12529762239 92% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07593519647 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.44776076573 2.80592935109 87% => OK
Unique words: 160.0 176.041082164 91% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.579710144928 0.561755894193 103% => OK
syllable_count: 409.5 506.74238477 81% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.5 1.60771543086 93% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 8.0 5.43587174349 147% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 1.0 2.10420841683 48% => OK
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 8.0 4.76152304609 168% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 16.0 16.0721442886 100% => OK
Sentence length: 17.0 20.2975951904 84% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.1883767412 49.4020404114 63% => OK
Chars per sentence: 81.75 106.682146367 77% => OK
Words per sentence: 17.25 20.7667163134 83% => OK
Discourse Markers: 4.875 7.06120827912 69% => OK
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 2.0 5.01903807615 40% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 9.0 8.67935871743 104% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 4.0 3.9879759519 100% => OK
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 3.0 3.4128256513 88% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.243770448893 0.244688304435 100% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0784132116411 0.084324248473 93% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0616754502149 0.0667982634062 92% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.151220670629 0.151304729494 100% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0885889139125 0.056905535591 156% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 9.5 13.0946893788 73% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 62.68 50.2224549098 125% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 8.7 11.3001002004 77% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 9.92 12.4159519038 80% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 8.03 8.58950901804 93% => OK
difficult_words: 62.0 78.4519038076 79% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.0 9.78957915832 82% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.8 10.1190380762 87% => OK
text_standard: 9.0 10.7795591182 83% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 61.797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.5 Out of 9
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