At the present time, the population of some countries includes a relatively large number of young adults, compared with older people.
Do the advantages of this situation outweigh the disadvantages?
Currently, In the world, there are some countries where population of youth is more than old people. There could be a pros and cons of having youth more but I believe, there are more advantages than drawback of having colossal young generation over the old one.
On the one hand, Young generation can always perform far better than previous one. Like CEO of Facebook, Mark found Facebook while studying in university and now it is a greatest company. Young people are having great confidence and energy which lacks in old people. Young people can have ability to take risk and critical decision in effective way. There has been research done that team of young people can have more innovative ideas than team of older people. Ideas can be implemented if right guidance has been given to it. Moreover, young people are future of country if older gave proper shape to them, then it will be a great opportunity to have pompous young people.
However, some might think that older people are always a great choice because they are having industry experience and lot of knowledge. Top companies always takes experienced person in high level of position instead of younger one. Old people always gives correct direction due to prescience which they are having by past experience.
In a nutshell, young people can anytime surpass older people. Youth always has vim and zeal to perform every activity. They can give outstanding outcomes if right direction has been given and this right direction can be addressed by older one. So, it is a combination of both generation to leverage country. But more younger generation means more optimism.
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 5, column 169, Rule ID: THE_SUPERLATIVE[1]
Message: Use 'the' with the superlative.
Suggestion: the
...le studying in university and now it is a greatest company. Young people are havi...
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Line 9, column 318, Rule ID: PAST_EXPERIENCE_MEMORY[1]
Message: Use simply 'experience'.
Suggestion: experience
... to prescience which they are having by past experience. In a nutshell, young people can ...
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Line 13, column 313, Rule ID: MOST_COMPARATIVE[2]
Message: Use only 'younger' (without 'more') when you use the comparative.
Suggestion: younger
...oth generation to leverage country. But more younger generation means more optimism.
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
but, however, if, moreover, so, then, while
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 17.0 13.1623246493 129% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 10.0 7.85571142285 127% => OK
Conjunction : 9.0 10.4138276553 86% => OK
Relative clauses : 5.0 7.30460921844 68% => More relative clauses wanted.
Pronoun: 12.0 24.0651302605 50% => OK
Preposition: 30.0 41.998997996 71% => OK
Nominalization: 15.0 8.3376753507 180% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 1371.0 1615.20841683 85% => OK
No of words: 275.0 315.596192385 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.98545454545 5.12529762239 97% => OK
Fourth root words length: 4.07223819929 4.20363070211 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.47183406327 2.80592935109 88% => OK
Unique words: 144.0 176.041082164 82% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.523636363636 0.561755894193 93% => More unique words wanted or less content wanted.
syllable_count: 434.7 506.74238477 86% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.6 1.60771543086 100% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 2.0 5.43587174349 37% => OK
Article: 0.0 2.52805611222 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 2.10420841683 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 1.0 0.809619238477 124% => OK
Preposition: 4.0 4.76152304609 84% => OK
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 17.0 16.0721442886 106% => OK
Sentence length: 16.0 20.2975951904 79% => The Avg. Sentence Length is relatively short.
Sentence length SD: 31.8036797941 49.4020404114 64% => OK
Chars per sentence: 80.6470588235 106.682146367 76% => OK
Words per sentence: 16.1764705882 20.7667163134 78% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.52941176471 7.06120827912 36% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.38176352705 91% => OK
Language errors: 3.0 5.01903807615 60% => OK
Sentences with positive sentiment : 11.0 8.67935871743 127% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 0.0 3.9879759519 0% => More negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 6.0 3.4128256513 176% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.126645326696 0.244688304435 52% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0464837019092 0.084324248473 55% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.0507558261244 0.0667982634062 76% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0810401926135 0.151304729494 54% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.032236596785 0.056905535591 57% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 10.2 13.0946893788 78% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 55.24 50.2224549098 110% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 7.44779559118 42% => Smog_index is low.
flesch_kincaid_grade: 9.5 11.3001002004 84% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 11.37 12.4159519038 92% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 7.7 8.58950901804 90% => OK
difficult_words: 57.0 78.4519038076 73% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 8.5 9.78957915832 87% => OK
gunning_fog: 8.4 10.1190380762 83% => OK
text_standard: 10.0 10.7795591182 93% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 56.1797752809 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 5.0 Out of 9
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