You were supposed to go on an interview in a few weeks, but you have since found out you cannot go on the date arranged. Write a letter to the potential employer. In your letter
- Tell them why you need to move the interview time
- Ask to change the interview date
- Explain that you are still interested in being interviewed for the job
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Calla Balls, who will have an interview in October 15th 2019 with Human resources department. I am writing to offer my apologies for not going on an interview on that day.I would like you can arrange a different day for interview.
I have found myself in this unpleasant situation for a reason. My father just call me and tell that my mother has been a heavy illness. She has been in hospital. I am worried about her condition. I took a flight to return my home and take care her. Her doctor said that she need three weeks to recuperate. I will come back in October 20th and I will be ready for an interview.
I am of course very interested in the position you offer me and I feel that I can apply my skills and experience in your company, so I would be very grateful if we could set a new date that fits your schedule.
Once again, please accept my sincere apologies for inconvenience caused.
Your faithfully,
Calla Balls
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Grammar and spelling errors:
Line 3, column 84, Rule ID: POSSESIVE_APOSTROPHE[2]
Message: Possible typo: apostrophe is missing. Did you mean 'resources'' or 'resource's'?
Suggestion: resources'; resource's
...terview in October 15th 2019 with Human resources department. I am writing to offer my a...
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Line 3, column 93, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...n October 15th 2019 with Human resources department. I am writing to offer my apo...
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Line 3, column 184, Rule ID: SENTENCE_WHITESPACE
Message: Add a space between sentences
Suggestion: I
...r not going on an interview on that day.I would like you can arrange a different ...
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Line 5, column 1, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...range a different day for interview. I have found myself in this unpleasant s...
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Line 7, column 1, Rule ID: ENGLISH_WORD_REPEAT_BEGINNING_RULE
Message: Three successive sentences begin with the same word. Reword the sentence or use a thesaurus to find a synonym.
... a different day for interview. I have found myself in this unpleasant si...
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Line 19, column 17, Rule ID: WHITESPACE_RULE
Message: Possible typo: you repeated a whitespace
Suggestion:
...onvenience caused. Your faithfully, Calla Balls
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Transition Words or Phrases used:
if, so, i feel, of course
Attributes: Values AverageValues Percentages(Values/AverageValues)% => Comments
Performance on Part of Speech:
To be verbs : 5.0 7.48453608247 67% => OK
Auxiliary verbs: 9.0 4.92783505155 183% => OK
Conjunction : 6.0 5.05154639175 119% => OK
Relative clauses : 6.0 3.03092783505 198% => OK
Pronoun: 38.0 32.9175257732 115% => OK
Preposition: 15.0 26.3917525773 57% => More preposition wanted.
Nominalization: 6.0 3.85567010309 156% => OK
Performance on vocabulary words:
No of characters: 807.0 937.175257732 86% => OK
No of words: 179.0 206.0 87% => More content wanted.
Chars per words: 4.50837988827 4.54256449028 99% => OK
Fourth root words length: 3.65774358864 3.78020617076 97% => OK
Word Length SD: 2.54138984394 2.54303337028 100% => OK
Unique words: 115.0 127.690721649 90% => More unique words wanted.
Unique words percentage: 0.642458100559 0.622605031667 103% => OK
syllable_count: 244.8 290.88556701 84% => OK
avg_syllables_per_word: 1.4 1.41237113402 99% => OK
A sentence (or a clause, phrase) starts by:
Pronoun: 12.0 9.13402061856 131% => OK
Article: 0.0 0.824742268041 0% => OK
Subordination: 0.0 1.83505154639 0% => More adverbial clause wanted.
Conjunction: 0.0 0.463917525773 0% => OK
Preposition: 0.0 1.44329896907 0% => More preposition wanted as sentence beginning.
Performance on sentences:
How many sentences: 12.0 12.6804123711 95% => OK
Sentence length: 14.0 16.3608247423 86% => OK
Sentence length SD: 50.9418922783 44.8134815571 114% => OK
Chars per sentence: 67.25 76.5299724578 88% => OK
Words per sentence: 14.9166666667 16.8248392259 89% => OK
Discourse Markers: 2.08333333333 4.34317383033 48% => More transition words/phrases wanted.
Paragraphs: 4.0 4.29896907216 93% => OK
Language errors: 6.0 2.54639175258 236% => Less language errors wanted.
Sentences with positive sentiment : 7.0 7.41237113402 94% => OK
Sentences with negative sentiment : 3.0 1.49484536082 201% => Less negative sentences wanted.
Sentences with neutral sentiment: 2.0 3.94845360825 51% => OK
What are sentences with positive/Negative/neutral sentiment?
Coherence and Cohesion:
Essay topic to essay body coherence: 0.164960672114 0.216113520407 76% => OK
Sentence topic coherence: 0.0476586663102 0.0766984524023 62% => OK
Sentence topic coherence SD: 0.05744199212 0.0603063233224 95% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence: 0.0898771738644 0.12726935374 71% => OK
Paragraph topic coherence SD: 0.0733777183659 0.0580467560999 126% => OK
Essay readability:
automated_readability_index: 7.3 8.37731958763 87% => Automated_readability_index is low.
flesch_reading_ease: 74.19 70.7449484536 105% => OK
smog_index: 3.1 3.82989690722 81% => OK
flesch_kincaid_grade: 6.4 7.45979381443 86% => OK
coleman_liau_index: 8.29 8.71597938144 95% => OK
dale_chall_readability_score: 6.54 7.59969072165 86% => OK
difficult_words: 25.0 41.2886597938 61% => More difficult words wanted.
linsear_write_formula: 5.5 8.62886597938 64% => OK
gunning_fog: 7.6 8.54432989691 89% => OK
text_standard: 7.0 8.15463917526 86% => OK
What are above readability scores?
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Rates: 70.2247191011 out of 100
Scores by essay e-grader: 6.25 Out of 9
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Note: the e-grader does NOT examine the meaning of words and ideas. VIP users will receive further evaluations by advanced module of e-grader and human graders.